All Comments on 'Love on a Family Cruise'

I guess I'm a sucker for a story which not only has sex but a plot ! I really liked this one --- only one minor criticsm ---- the ending seemed a little rushed --- maybe there was an opening for more sex during the 'courtship'?

<p>I too must agree that the pacing and tone of this story were perfect. However, I did not find the ending rushed. I thought that the story focused on the meeting and courtship, most of which happened aboard ship. Their subsequent marriage seemed almost inevitable by the end of the cruise. I must also give you kudos for not being afraid to give Kelly a busty and sexy appearance.</p>

<p>The only small issue I had was the initial reference to Iraq, about which I do not not share the narrator's point of view. But having known someone lost in 9/11 I accept that my position may be more hard core than others.</p>

<p>In any event, you wrote a delightfully pleasant romantic story. Thank you.</p>

This was a very romantic and warm tale, one which I truly enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Very very enjoyable. Thanks!

I really liked this one! Great story with a great plot! Wonderful job!!!!

Very warm and gentle story.

5*

In ten years they’ll be hanging around her belly button.

Best story in this section .(romance).

Why on Earth was he “pleasantly surprised at how many of the moms wore,and still looked quite good in,bikinis”,especially if “many of them also hadn't hit 25 yet”?!THIS IS A BIG NONSENSE!IT’S ABSOLUTELY NORMAL AND DEFINITELY NOT SURPRISING FOR MOTHERS TO WEAR BIKINI AND TO LOOK VERY GOOD(not just “good” in them)!MOST OF THE WOMEN IN THIS WORLD ARE MOTHERS and THEY WEAR BIKINI ON THE BEACH OR AT THE POOL and LOOK ABSOLUTELY GREAT,all the more the young mothers who ARE LESS THAN 25 YEARS OLD!STOP WRITING SUCH HUGE CRAP and WAISTING OUR TIME with it!

Also,I MUST DISAGREE WITH some other people who said in their comments that this is “best story in this section” or that the breasts of that woman “will be hanging around her belly button in ten years”!First of all,THIS STORY DEFINITELY ISN’T “the best in this section”,but A RATHER POOR STORY!THERE ARE MANY OTHER STORIES which ARE FAR BETTER in this section!Then,IT’S NOT TRUE AT ALL that the breasts of that woman will sag “in ten years”!In ten years,she will be only CLOSING ON 40!At that age,THE HUGE MAJORITY OF WOMEN HAVE BREASTS THAT LOOK VERY WELL(as it’s the case of A LOT OF WOMEN who are in their 40’s) and CERTAINLY DO NOT SAG!Some people SHOULD REALLY THINK A LITTLE before writing SUCH RUBBISH!