All Comments on 'Love Takes Time'

please tell me his is not the end! more please!

You have successfully written about new love as it should be, but unfortunately usually is not.

I found this story very good and readable.

Please ignore other negative comments. You have real skill.

Thankyou.

Great story...slow sublime progression...enjoying it all. Keep it going please!!!

Try and when your characters are talking to try and put emotion in the characters and how they speak it seems to me, maybe not for others, but for me I think the proper English speaking characters aren't as realistic unless said character is known to act like that, otherwise good writing