All Comments on 'Love Unexpected Ch. 01'
by Raebrown
- 15 Comments
Anonymousabout 9 years agoSeriously, we all know you've written the rest in your head. Now just put it on paper, or online, as it were.
larry74403about 9 years agoThat barely qualifies as a submission. That's closer to an excerpt.
ChasBabout 9 years ago36D and 9 inches? Cut the b/s! 32 or 34 B or C and 6 to 7 inches would be more like it. Why do so many writers make their character into freaks.
Anonymousabout 9 years agodon't forget were leaving in an hour bro.
That night I laid in bed wondering what the rest of the summer would hold.
thought they had left !!!!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoFor those of you who are calling bs on size...I'm a NATURAL 36D...it happens...my sister is a 34DD...crap happens.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI quit reading when you mentioned the drive from South Georgia, wherever that is, to Tulum Mexico wouldn't be too bad. Idiotic!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoEveryone's writing style is different, their own, and/or not perfect. Keep going with it. It's getting interesting.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoIt's a good start and as for people saying that 36 D beasts are fake or unrealistic then they can go to hell I my self am a 38DD naturally keep going
rg27612about 9 years agoAlbany, Ga to Tulum, Mexico: 2467 miles. Not a day trip...and pretty bad driving on some of those roads.
Try to be more realistic.
Oh, and for you skeptics ... my 60 YO spouse still has her (not quite as perky) 34Ds.
Tigersmanabout 9 years agoThis was a good start but you had one mistake at the end. I loved the trip idea. In 2005 I rode my motorcycle to Canada which took me across the Rockies twice for a total of 8700 miles.
