- Incest/Taboo
- Love x Two Ch. 01
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My name is Sam Richards and this is the story of my mom and I.
The year was 2004, I was fourteen and my mother was thirty two. I was out with my friends when it happened. On July 27 2004 my dad died in a car crash. My dad was a good man, he didn't deserve to be killed by a drunk driver.
When my friend's mom drove me to the hospital, I got to see my dad before he died and his last words were, "I love you Sam, please, take care of your mother. Help her as best you can." And then, he passed on.
The next four years my mom and I really bonded, the days after dad died my mom would want me to hold her when we sat on the couch, or when she was sad, or when she was lonely. So I was used to her and I cuddling on the couch.
My mom was 5'6 with a slim waist and she had 34C breasts, so she was a perfect ten. She also had the smile that could light up a room. I don't know why but after dad died she's never had a real boyfriend, when she has a guy over she doesn't have sex with them. Once I put video cameras all throughout the house to see, I went over to my friend Danny's house and when she brought her date in side she told him that she had a good night and then he'd leave. Then in seconds after he left she'd go masturbate, and yes I had a video camera in there too. Her pussy was beautiful it was bald and beautiful. Oh yea I forgot to mention I'm in love with my mom.
It was the summer of 2008, I was eighteen and my mom was thirty six. For her thirty sixth birthdays I was bringing her to her favorite restaurant (Magianos) where I'll be giving her the Diamond earrings I got her. I saved up all my money to get them, but my mom was worth it.
It was September 29th (My mom's birthday) when I got up I called into work that I was sick, so I could spend the day with my mom. When I walked down the stairs for breakfast she was sitting at the table reading a magazine.
"Hi sweetheart, I am so excited for today." She said smiling at me.
"I am too." I responded, while pouring a cup of coffee. Mom and I are having a picnic at the park, then going to the movies, and then to dinner so we'll be together all day. "Are you ready for you present?"
"I hope you didn't spend a lot, I would feel awful."
I ran up to my room and got her present, when I brought it down she was so excited. Since dad died we didn't have a lot of money but we had enough to get by with some extra.
"Here open it." When I sat down she opened it, when she opened the Kay box her eyes widened.
"Sam I love them, they're beautiful. But where did you get the money?"
"I've saved up for a while, and I thought you would like them."
"Sammy they're beautiful, you are the best son a mother could have." She said jumping onto my lap.
I was so embraced as she hugged me and her ass was rubbing against my dick, pretty quickly my dick was hard and I could tell she noticed, but she didn't care.
Then she said with her beautiful smile "It looks like your little man is excited,"
"Um..." I stuttered.
"I'm actually quite flattered, that my young handsome son can get a stiffy from his mom." She said with a sexy smile, plus she was still sitting on my cock. Oh yea I forgot to add that she was wearing tight yoga pants, so it felt awesome.
"I think your beautiful mom, I always have." Then she got up and I did to.
"Well Mr. Handsome you'd better take a shower, and then we can talk about how beautiful I am when you're done." She said. When I started to walk away she pinched my ass, but I didn't object.
Throughout my shower I kept thinking about my mom. She's so beautiful and I love her so much, I just want to be with her and kiss her. When I was done I went back downstairs to find my mom wearing a super sexy black dress.
The dress only went down to mid-thigh; she also had her beautiful brown hair down. She was so beautiful, I wanted her so bad.
"Wow mom you're a knock-out!" I exclaimed to her.
"That was the idea, but it's only for you honey."
"What? Why?"
"Honey, can I talk to you?"
When we went to the living room she sat right next to me. "Honey, what we did in the kitchen-"
"I'm sorry mom, I shouldn't of reacted the way I did. It's just that you're so beautiful."
"Honey I was about to say that I liked it, you've been the provider for this family since your dad died. I think I've fallen in love with you." She started to tear up.
"Mom, I've been in love with you since I was thirteen. And trust me I still do."
"I have to admit I was pretty suspicious when I found my panties in the hamper with fresh cum stains all over. Also to be truthful, I licked it clean." I can't say I was surprised. After she said that I went in for a passionate kiss. I did it so fast she didn't suspect, and she definitely didn't object.
She tasted so sweet; I felt like I could live off her, and stay here forever. When we stopped she said, "I love you so much Sam I want you so bad, I've fingered myself so many times thinking about you. I want you to make love to me."
"I would love to." I replied. With that she took my wrist and led me to her bedroom. When we entered the bedroom, it was so clean she had all her clothes put away and there was nothing on the floor, unlike my room.
We both began to take our clothes off. When mom was completely naked her vagina was still the bald beautiful pussy I saw in my home video. When she lay on the bed she beckoned me forward with her finger. I went on top of her and we had a passionate kiss. When I centered my cock to her vagina she moaned and she said "Make love to me Sam I want you to be my lover for now and forever." I pushed it in.
There I did it, I lost my virginity. She felt like; wet, war, soft, velvet all around my cock. While we made love she moaned and she said "Oh baby, I'm going to cum... oh yea harder, oh I'm almost there."
"Oh I'm going to cum too."
"Fill your juices of love, oh yes baby more give me more! "She screamed. When she came I came at the same time, It felt amazing.
When I was done filling her, I fell next to her on the bed. "I love you mom, it's always been you and it will only be you."
"Oh Sam, you are the perfect man."
"I want to take you out so let's go take a shower together and we'll leave."
"Are you sure Sammy, you're juices," she said looking at her cum drenched vagina "are a good enough present, plus you got me those diamond earrings."
"Mom today is your birthday. Plus when we get older it'll be our anniversary I want this to be special so let's go."
"I love you so much." She said passionately kissing me. When it was done I responded with
"I love you too mom, and I will until the end of time." With that started to cry, but I passionately kissed her again.
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Hi, I hope you liked the story. If you didn't I kindly ask you to leave, please don't leave a comment insulting me. If your one of the people who do like my stories I still am writing my other series, so don't worry. If you have an idea for any of my stories comment or contact me.
-James
- COMMENTS
Foxterot7a9 months agoHaving read 500-600 incestuous love stories between mother and son and someone who has no problem with mutuall consensual incest in real life, I offer the following comments:
1. Mother and son chracters need to be dev eloped in both depth and breadth. Right now they are two dimeniional.
2 There is no mental, emotional, psychological attachmet of the characters except for the stated fact that they are mother son.
3. I do not think that, in a real life situation, a mother and son would immediately jump into a sexual relationship.
I ratedthis first chapter 4 stars becaus of potential.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe story was great but left me wanting descriptions. Mom's looks and details about the sex between them, like what (in detail) did they do to each other.
Bfreetorunover 12 years agoI would have liked it more if you could have been more graphic in the sex scenes more detail and variety, a blowjob and some cunnilingus would have set it off. Keep writing.
Anonymousover 12 years agoPointers, since you seem to want constructive feedback.
*Add more description of the mom's looks, and don't worry about this part being realistic. For me, it is totally OK if you describe her as a playboy playmate of the year in the looks category.
*It may be hard to do, but reread your story after you write it and a day later. See how it flows, and look for grammar mistakes. Yes, and logic mistakes also.
*The cameras was a bit much. You could have made it more realistic to simply say that your video camera had a security setting..many do, that allows it to only come on when there is motion in the room. Then you could have said that you hid it in the living room and thus was able to hear and see her tell the guy she had a good time and then closed the door on him. You could have added in some paragraphs about him knowing she masturbates at certain times when she thinks he is out of the house visiting friends. Then you add in that he hid the camera in her room to video her doing that. The wiring the house with cameras was a bit too much. I think that only goes well if the guy is fairly well off, and or somebody who has access to these things, like a cop or something. In short, keep this idea very simple but logical. Yes, technology is out there to easily do this stuff now, but it does cost money.
*Why do we care about these people? You didn't do a bad job in this set up, but like the whole story, it was just a little bit rushed. Keep this story fresh, and work some new details in there and rewrite it sometime, but really stretch out the part where he turns 18. By this, I mean, don't rush them to bed as he turns 18. You had a perfect segue into some build up when you said that they cuddled.
You could have had him become more the man of the house as he turned 18, like getting a job and being more of a provider. Then you build up the cuddling stuff. Titillate us with details of them spooning and it becoming slowly more sexual. Like them dozing off one night and her waking up to find him holding her breast in his sleep, and her feeling his hard-on pressing into her butt on most nights.
You could have her turn toward him on night while they are watching a movie and in a flirty way, look up at him, reach down and squeeze his cock and say that he seems to get excited a lot, or something to that effect. Then she let's go and rolls back over. This first time he is basically just shocked she did it. Maybe you could have her do it again a week later but this time, he has been waiting for her to do it again so when she does and then goes to pull her hand away, he grabs it and holds it on his cock, and tells her it feels good so he doesn't want her to let go.
*overall, the story was excellent...just too short. So next story, write it like this, but then shelve it for a day or two, and then pull it back out and read it...then you might find ways to add to it.
*here's a trick we learned in English Composition I. You write a simple sentence.
"A girl stood at the window." Then you start adding to it to make it tell a story.
As the rain poured down, the girl stood at the window.
As the rain poured down, the girl with blond hair and blue eyes stood at the window.
As the April rain poured down, the girl with the blond hair and blue eyes stood at the window.
As the April rain poured down, the girl with the blond hair and blue eyes stood at the big picture window.
As the April rain poured down, the girl with the blond hair and blue eyes stood at the big picture window that overlooked the front yard.
As the April rain poured down, the girl with the blond hair and blue eyes stood at the big picture window that overlooked the front yard where she watched a cat.
As the April rain poured down, the girl with the blond hair and blue eyes stood at the big picture window that overlooked the front yard where she watched a tiger stripped cat run for the cover of the porch.
This is why you reread the story a few times. You'll find ways of adding to sentences and even add more sentences.
Anyway, kudos to you though because you appear to have talent. Keep it up.
mrpervy46over 12 years agoThere's a big difference between gutless insulting comments from none writers, and cowardly comments from "anonymous" people. Although I think a lot of the comments are not to bad. Constructive criticism should come from fellow authors only in my book, as I a none writer I never do it. Keep on writing bud, you'll be fine. Thank you for writing; it is always good to read on my favorite subject "incest romance".
Anonymousover 12 years agotoo fast but the story plot is good. keep writing. next part you must show some passionate love and anal sex between mom son. and story should proceed slowly.
Lancelot55over 12 years agoYour plot and characters had a lot of potential, but instead of setting the scene and developing the love affair, you rushed them to bed. Please with your next story take your time and let it all evolve slowly and fully! Fair job!! Please continue writing as I look forward to your growth as an author.
