All Comments on 'Lovely Day for a Ride'

by angelicminx

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Ambi_oneAmbi_oneabout 19 years ago
fantasy fulfilled

another fantasy of mine to take my wife with the aid of another man

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
wow!

what a hot fantasy ... great work .. more, more !

cummybearcummybearabout 19 years ago
Yummy

Minx... please keep writing...

This was a wonderfully playful fantasy. You could really sense the love and passion between the characters, and the sex as exceedingly hot.

Can't wait to read more!!!

msboy8msboy8about 19 years ago
Hot Story

Thanks Minx, That was a great story. Please keep on writing.

msboy8

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
hot

this was hot and relaxing and and easy reading very well done

blackpenblueinkblackpenblueinkabout 19 years ago
Hot two on one scene

Liked the fact that the hubby was the one she wanted to fuck her ass in the dp scene. Sounded great.

Keep it up.

Honey123Honey123about 19 years ago
Whoa!

That was a surprise...and good one!!

Loved the story!

~Honey

WinemasterWinemasterabout 19 years ago
nice story

writing was very good....I enjoyed it. The two sounded soooo hot together and there was a nice addition to the story...

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101almost 19 years ago
Very hot

This was a very hot story and very well written. I have vetted it for the next volume of "Coming Together" and I will send you an email with some suggestions for what I consider improvements.

JoesephusJoesephusover 17 years ago
Very Hot and very well written

The writing was smooth and the story flowed. It was one of those days the couple will always remember. I'm looking forward to reading more.

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