Lovers' Oath Ch. 05

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"Sure, no problem. But that, all that mess, would be needless if you didn't resist what is natural, Kiel. This bloody war has been going on for over a millennium now. And life shouldn't stop because of it."

"We'll see." Kiel gave a small smile and looked back at the monitor he had switched on before. Keying in a command, he brought up a live video feed from the pack training room where the little fierce woman was simultaneously sword fighting with two of his fine warriors and still made them seem clumsy in comparison to her graceful movements. He didn't even notice Rohan get up and leave his office to leave him alone with his thoughts, as he continued to watch her through out the rest of the training session.

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Author's Note: Thanks everyone for reading. Hope you liked it. Chapter 6 is under construction. Please leave a comment on what you think about it and vote.these are the only way I can know what you think about it. Thanks.

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MizTMizTover 13 years ago
WOW

The more I read, the more I want. You truly have created a wonderful storyline. I like the way it is written. The way you bounce back and forth telling each persons point of view is wonderful. I have only one more chapter to catch up, so I need you to start writing faster than you have been. I hate to patiently wait on a good story. LOL

PinkPantheressPinkPantheressover 13 years ago
Can't wait

The suspense is killing me please post quickly so we can find out keep up the great work :)

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 13 years ago
This was a great chapter!

The only problem is that it could be another three months before the next! Please put us out of our misery and post quickly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I agee Totaly Awesome

So glad you posted and cant wait for more.....More.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome

Awesome

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