All Comments on 'Lovers' Oath'

This sounds good!!! I can't wait for the next chapter for this story!

Looks like you have a winner here :)

Great chapter by the way.

Cant wait for the 2nd chapter!!!!!

Very good start to what promises to be a good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Fantastic beginning. Can't wait for more.

thanks to everyone who are taking their time out for writing a comment. These are so encouraging. Keep'em coming people. Unless at least 50 people vote, I can't take part in the monthly contests, and I haven't got all 50 yet. :'(

Plz vote and comment. And the second chapter is almost done. Just a few more pages and after proof reading it, I will post it. Hopefully within 3-4 days.

And just so you know, this story will be having sequels, I've got ideas for 3 more.

So, Votes please, :) ... Pretty please... *giving you the Bumpy Dog eyes*.

i like this beginning :)

on to the next chapter.

I only found your story today, and know I have alot of catching up to do. And catch up I will because you are off to a great start. I can't wait to see what happens next so I'm going to start chapter 2 right now.

Very nice start...I love the premise so and can't wait to wade into chapter 2, so....

After much combing I think I've happened upon a story that I may enjoy. I like the way you've set it in an alternate world. Sometimes writers become so absorbed in describing a new and fantastical place that it detracts from being an entertaining read. Thankfully this one doesn't suffer from this flaw.