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LindsayMurrayLindsayMurrayover 2 years ago

Omg this was... Amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

81 year old straight guy here. my straight wife and i have the same birthday -- hers is in 1957. married 21 yrs... 3 months ago she told me she had lost all sexual desire. we used to do vaginal, bi-directional oral, anal.

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kaleonanikaleonaniover 2 years ago

Now this is a real love story especially a true story. Unbelievable sex that only a woman can extract from another woman. So I'm grateful for God creating that in women that they can explore it with immense pleasure, unfortunately man doesn't have that capability. I just can't imagine a man coming between to beautiful women making love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i did read it...it was ok.

FandeborisFandeborisover 2 years ago

Excellent story telling. It would be nice to hear what happened next. What happened to Jessie? I know you said they did their “happy every after “ but some want the “rest of the story”.

Don’t get me wrong. The story stands for itself, but sometimes, when you get a happy buzz from a story, you just want the feeling to continue . This is one of those. I got my happy buzz. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I think you are a very good writer , as good as any book I've read . But spicy hot

apollo_XIapollo_XIover 2 years ago

Pressed my name too fast. The story was written in the first person which tells us how Jessie's love developed but we never get Diane's version. I believe that would be a wonderful conclusion to this beautiful love story.

apollo_XIapollo_XIover 2 years ago

Wonderful story!

I believe this is my 3rd or 4th go-round with this story abs it just keeps getting better. I find it interesting that the story is

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I run out of precum my cock was num this story was the best ever. Need a part 2. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I couldn't stop reading it. I lost track of how many times that I had a climax. My own pussy was on fire screaming for attention. By the time I got to chapter five, the smell of pussy was thick in my bedroom. My girlfriend came into my bedroom and laid down next to me and without saying anything, she put her head between my legs and licked my pussy, tasting the sweet taste of nectar dribbling out of me. Thank you for a incredible story. It was so lifelike and intimate

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can anybody tell the name of story, where girl name was hunter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Mind blowing! I have jerked off to this story many times.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

really enjoyed her "Stress Relief" in the office. All the pre meeting sessions were so well worded

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story. Keep up the good work.

AlexieeeeAlexieeeealmost 3 years ago

Im totally in love with this story!!! <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Thank you thank you thank you … etc

ibbunkibbunkalmost 3 years ago

Very enjoyable, deserves a part 2.

Thanks

fran969fran969almost 3 years ago

With the expansion of the firm, I hope only females with long, talented tongues are hired. They must be experienced..!!!

SammyMichaelsSammyMichaelsalmost 3 years ago

I loved it more than I can express in mere words.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great premise and very erotic story. Oddly a bit too long but somehow also ended too soon right before it would pivot to a new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is a work of art, a lovely story, extraordinary. My first comment here and it's surprising the genre I commented on. It would be lovely to have both of them as lovers...

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 3 years ago

Wow, what an excellent story! I have probably read this story a dozen times now, and it never ceases to captivate me. Thank you for sharing it with us!

AyaaChannAyaaChannabout 3 years ago

.. Wow.. I cant believe this happened in real life. What an amazing and unbelievable story. I want to thankyou for writing and your friends for sharing their story. Im actually awestruck. I have to say that im happy that Jessica FINNALY got off to. Even in dominant /submissive or whatever kind of relationships, i think you should give eachother pleasure. Even though Jessica loved it, she was also suffering because she wanted it to xD. Anayways, what an amazing story and very well written to. I hope that they will stay togheter forever. Because being able to have a romantic but business relationship togheter like they have is something you dont find often.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I truly loved it. I love them both; I am so glad that they found love together.

Freudzslip69Freudzslip69about 3 years ago

What an AMAZING, FANTASTIC. EROTIC story. I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it. Having had an enormous amount of experience, it takes a great deal to affect me, and this story did. I've been a few lesbians in my time, even two "diesel dykes," and have been witness a number of times to my wife and her girlfriend making love...yet, even having been involved in, and witness to all of that, this still got me soooooooooo HOT and HARD.

Well done, Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

being a male and seeing nothing but me me me. to see some one not only get pleasure but to give it. im not gay just a man that likes to see people enjoy life. but to see that life is worth more when you find a partner that makes life worth liveing or as my now deaceased wife would say( live love and laught.) P .S. we were together thirty three years and in all that time i never hit her unless by her order you know . no dont stop ,NO DONT STOP, NO DONT STOP,

DONT STOP.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

maybe it's because i look at everything from a male point of view,

i, don't know, but, i, wasn't that into this story for the first part, i'm

talking about where she goes down on her boss, and gets nothing

in return. it's like some kind of duty, it's for sure a one sided affair.

i, thought i'd just keep reading and see what happens to this poor

confused young woman. she sure looked like it was going to end

badly just as i thought. then, things turned around for her and the

last couple of pages, were sexy and exciting, turned out to be a

great love story. i, liked it, a lot.

sharksharksharksharkabout 3 years ago

Love how her Mistress calls her Jessie, a kind of MDLG situation.

maninconnmaninconnabout 3 years ago
OMG

That may be the most beautiful love story I ever read. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is one of those stories I come back to read every once in a while. I really love that it’s true. I love the way it’s written. The taboo nature of the story between a boss and a secretary. I wish I could rate it every time I read it and get it back on the top of the HOF.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
True Leabian Romance

LOVE this! Realistic, love the buid up. I need this to be a sequel.

DingeraeDingeraeabout 3 years ago
Love this

Read this story like more than 5 less then 10 💕 one of my all time favorites!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Grade inflation?

This story has been on LE for nearly 12 years and has over one million views. I can’t help but be surprised that its current score is just 4.84. Many newer stories far too easily garner scores much higher than that. It appears that voters nowadays are far more willing to give out five stars than in the past. The unfortunate result is that classic stories like this are being slowly pushed down (and eventually off) the hall of fame lists by newer stories with far fewer votes. It is also frustrating to see multiple chapters in one story each taking up multiple slots in the hall of fame category.

Since the site moderators have shown no interest in changing how the HOF is managed, my only advice to the reader is to favorite the classics before they disappear into the morass of stories. Otherwise you’ll never find them again. ( BTW, this is not a complaint about or a criticism of the newer stories, many of which are excellent in their own right.)

nyteramblernyteramblerover 3 years ago

If that was a true story then I am happy to be allowed to be told it and am glad that they found each other and that they are still together. Shows they found a true love and partner no matter how it occurred. Congrats.

NoTanLines2NoTanLines2over 3 years ago
A WONDERFUL, PERCEPTIVE, MOVING STORY

I love happy endings! I just wish you would write more stories...please.

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 3 years ago

That was one of the hottest stories on the site - a shame I couldn't give it 100 stars.

Highc70Highc70over 3 years ago
Wonderful storytelling

Incredible! This is the first of your stories that I have read, but definitely not the last. You are a magnificent storyteller. Well done!!!

TreacherousOneTreacherousOneover 3 years ago
Damn That Was Hot!

Excellent writing! Very descriptive! I could visualize in my head what was going on. Story pulled me in and didn't let go. First story in a long time where i did not skim through. Looking forward to reading more from author. Added to my favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
very, very well written...

my only quibble, the perennial american inability to distinguish between the meanings of to lie and to lay.

6niner6ninerover 3 years ago
outstanding!

one of the very best i have read here.

well-written, soft and romantic, and yet, so very horny.

keep delighting us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Incredible!!!!!!

I want to read more about them..So explicitly explained and written. You are a hell ofa writer. Love it. Thanks.... much love. I just can't get out if it. Woww!!! ❤

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is incredible story very much likely to read

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
BEST STORY!!!

This is the only story I come back to time and time again. I wish it had more

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
amazing

honestly one of the best stories I’ve read on here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Lengthy work of quality.

I have to bring to attention that you did what SO many writers keep failing to do: concentrate on the ORAL part of the oral sex, and of course the clit love. All too often the Grand Finale of a lesbian sex scene is penetration, which of course does the trick and is &quot;what she waited for all along&quot;. You avoided that easy trap, more writers should learn to do what you've done here. Bravo!

DecemberstouchDecemberstouchover 3 years ago
Lovely

I love the fact that it is not fiction! Would have love to read more dialogue from Diane and Jessie ( if I am permitted to call her that)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Particular Lens Indeed

Luckily this was the 1st story I read on Literotica. A blessing in fact. Because I forgot I was living a lie. Until one day my porn addicted, most often neglectful, ex husband made the mistake of introducing me to literotica. I was so incredibly turned on it was like the gates of my repressed self opened & there was no going back then. My loyalty to this man kept me in denial. Thank you for reminding me of who I am. Your writing is truly a gift.

Mandy Jae

weav610weav610over 3 years ago
I LOVE a good love story. It's humbling to know my wife and i aren't the only ones.

TheserialwaffleTheserialwafflealmost 4 years ago

I could give you 55... stars or a membership to Star Alliance for your stories and this in particular. Congratulations

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Superb!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Critics choice

Siskel and Ebert gives it two cocks up !

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderalmost 4 years ago

What a great story, well written and the fact that it is a true story makes it a lot hotter

BadHusbandMikeBadHusbandMikealmost 4 years ago
fantastic

I could feel the turmoil as the story progressed. I am also a sucker for a bit of romance, so you checked all the boxes for me. Thank you.

DiTo_DDiTo_Dabout 4 years ago

If only...

....there was a chance I could describe all pleasure given, the way you did

...write such an incredible story in just so few words

...there were 5 more stars to give to you

...I could hold you and thank you for giving me the opportunity to share this with you.

I just deal with the thought that there's two people very happy. Thank you!

sapphicdeesapphicdeeabout 4 years ago
Amazing!

This is one of the best things I have read on here. Your characters are great. I loved the build up and uncertainty between them. You're an amazing writer. Thank u.

Air_DryAir_Dryabout 4 years ago
Sucess

You succeeded. It is highly erotic and I'm glad I came across your name then found this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
WOW!

Very well written, great job. It could have only been written by a woman with that kind of detailed description that has experienced it herself. Please come back and write some more slow seduction stories. I loved it. I had an erection the entire time I was reading it. I want more please.

paulyepspaulyepsabout 4 years ago

Wow ... that’s all I have to say .. that was amazing.. a slow buildup .. I loved this story ... it was perfect ... thank you ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Are you still there?

Would you write a sequel please? I have been re-reading this lovely story over the years and still craving to see more about them. Wishing myself lucky enough to read more of your beautiful works before I died:)

Thanks a million for sharing your talent with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Brilliant!

Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome story

OMG I'm so erect!

Nightfall64Nightfall64over 4 years ago
Awe!!!

This was very hot and I truly felt for Jessica, the ending though, I think I finally know what it means tears of joy, I think you could have written it without sex and made it very touching as it is it is both very hot and very touching. Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Breathtaking

I was holding my breath at times I realised, connecting with Jessie's situation of lust and love. This was so well structured and really glad it ended in the way it did. My brain can now fill in the 'happily ever after'. The sex scenes were so well written, describing so accurately that point of ecstasy where the 'receiver' can be so lost in their pleasure but restless as they want to grip hold of something or someone and draw them ever closer. So well done! Yes RedEmerald, this was a gem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh my God.

Now I have to fantasize about almost all the female bosses I've had over the years, wishing I could have worshiped their pussies for them like this, almost every day.

Except one. She was sexy as hell, but she was the cruelest bitch I ever worked with.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Truth really is sexier than fiction

That was an amazing story. The fact that it was based on real events made it even better. Also you are a terrific writer. I gave the story five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thank You!

Enjoyed your tender, thougtful, and moving story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
And soo

I came really hard. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Beautiful

I hope you continue to write. Beautifully developed and written.

MarshallaMarshallaabout 5 years ago
Outstanding!!!

Absolutely amazing, incredibly passionate, and intensely hot.

Not to mention loving! Very much so.

A hell of a chance to take, considering the risks involved. But sometimes you just have to take that chance, and hope for the best.

Knowing that this story is true, I can only say, Ladies, I wholeheartedly wish you a lifetime of love.

To the Author, thank you so much for putting this into print!

5 Stars, and an Instant Favorite.

Thanks again!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Brilliance!

What an awesome story! 😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
That was amazing!

The best I've read so far, please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Absolute favourite

I keep returning and rereading this. I’ve lost count of how many times. Love it so much I can’t even say. Author, you are amazing!

FreshAvocadoFreshAvocadoover 5 years ago
YO

This was so fucking good. I’m like in love with my boss so this story was extra yummy

ms969ms969over 5 years ago
Chapter 2 Please

I loved the blossoming love story far more than the sexual exploits which finally occurred on Page 5. To me, a lifelong lesbian, the beauty of sex is not centered on our vagina. Sure that plays a part, a big part, but we never start there. Cuddling, roaming hands, gentle talk, even proper lighting are needed forerunners.

I would love to hear how this story moves on. Obviously, they need to move in together, with Jessie being trained for bigger roles. As a lover iit would never work to have the Senior Partner's Personal Assistant, one of several at the same time. Perhaps they can give her an adjoining office as the Office Manager (appropriately trained) as they move forward. Of course being taken care of at night would relieve much of the need for daytime service.

You have a great 10 year old story that itself was 10 years old. That is a large part of any career. Build on this with growth, travel, and does Jessie retire when her wife who would now be in her 60s retire.

Thanks,

Beth

DreadWriter6969DreadWriter6969over 5 years ago
Best love story on Literotica. That it's true is a genuine bonus.

This is the best love story I've read in a long time. I hope they still are as much in love and lust. I've fantasized many times about somebody finding me in my office revealing my panties as I touch myself and kneeling down to kiss me where it most helps

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic

Fantastic length...as I finally came right before the kiss. I was sopping wet and biting my lip the whole time!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing

Fantastic details with the oral sex, made me wet.

TrueMortTrueMortalmost 6 years ago
Fantastic story

I loved this, you create the picture beautifully, I just enjoyed reading it so much.

And yes I was a little misty eyed towards the end. :)

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 6 years ago
I love this story!

And keep coming back to it, over and over again! I love your stories RedEmerald, and wish you would write more. Thank you for sharing this with us!

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 6 years ago

Why do I keep coming back to read this story again and again? Because it is simply one of the best stories on this site. That's why!

DominantsinnerDominantsinneralmost 6 years ago
Excellent

OK First I want you to know that in reading this I took the true story part to heart. I found it to be such a deeply moving story and feel these women deserve the love they feel for each other. I after meeting my dear departed babygirl became a hopless romantic (lol) and this story really touched me. You did an excellent job putting it down in writing. Thank you and Thank your friends for sharing it with the rest of us.

mark_8675309mark_8675309almost 6 years ago
Very Good Read

I loved how this built up. The seeming innocence of the assistant just 'helping'. Very sexy.

HotForLitHotForLitalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful!!

Simply beautiful! Thank you

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 6 years ago
I so love this story!

This is, without a doubt, one of the hottest stories on Literotica, and yet the love you feel when reading it is so very good too! Thanks for sharing this with us!

silverace1silverace1about 6 years ago
Wow!

Whoever once joked "kill all the lawyers" certainly never met your amazing characters! Long live those lesbian here's!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Excellent

This story was a wonderful read. Thank you for your efforts. Author should definitely consider creating original works, if she hasn't already.

Also, to the anonymous poster: you must lack basic reading comprehension skills and/or common sense, because this story is listed under the lesbian sub-category. Might wanna check those before you click a story, yeah?

Because elsewise, this was a pathetic attempt at being a troll.

eros53eros53about 6 years ago
Sexy lawyers..,

...who would have thought? Loved this story, it was sweet and, yes, sexy too. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Oh my God, please come back.

I have read this story since 2011. Looking back, that's a whole 7 years ago. I was a teenager then, only 16. I've read all 3 of the stories you've uploaded on literotica numerous times ; disappointed that you have never returned to the site to upload new fiction.

Please come back. You really have a talent and a knack for writing. Your characterisations are always relatable and realistic.

Please come back

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please write second installment

I've read and reread this story for years. Adorably sexy, and definitely leaves me with a tingle!

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

I simply just adore this wonderfully sexy story. I've read it several times and it always leaves me tingly in all the right places. Mmm.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 6 years ago
Fantastic story!

Incredibly erotic and loving at the same time! I loved this story! thank you for sharing it with us!

litjunkie1litjunkie1over 6 years ago
Erotic

That was easily the most beautiful, touching, and erotic story I have ever read on this site. I kind of wish there was a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love bios...

That was a thrill. A real story!

tiresias504tiresias504over 6 years ago
Parfait!

My second reading, and just as terrific as the first. I know I'm just echoing many other reviews, but the truth will out, as they say. This was the most agonizingly erotic work I've had the pleasure of reading. You wrapped the reader in a soft, silken sheet of teasing, torturous action to a plot culmination of...well, if I must I'll repeat myself - perfection. No hurry-up or crudities; I don't see how you managed it. Please accept my appreciation for an exceptional work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
With my deepest thanks....

Thank you. That was the most beautiful erotic story I've read in years. I keep coming back to it and loving it even more.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

I've read this story several times and after each time, I grow to love it even more.

pacifist91wpacifist91wover 6 years ago
most sincerely, thank you

you crafted a gorgeous work of art and shared it with any and all readers who'd happen upon it. that's remarkable. i'm honored to have read this chef d'oeuvre. i consider myself a better-than-average writer, but this amazing story reminds me that there are real works of genius out there. thank you, thank you, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This story is the most viewed lesbian story...and this about the 20th time I've read this story, since 2010, when I first came across it. There's simply nothing like it on this part of the site, in my opinion. The love scenes feel so organic, and real. Outstanding writing...it would play really well on film.

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