All Comments on 'Lovers Without Realizing It'

Most stories I will read and move on. This is one of the stories that I keep returning to to read once more, and once more, and .... Thanks so much for sharing this story with your readers.

What a beautiful story. Told with patience which allowed it to breathe. It offered gentleness and a sweet love that few who write can manage. I found it so romantic and loving and very sweet. I fell in love with both characters. Adorable

I think is my 4th read, absolutely love this story and how their relationship develops. So hot!

My favourite story on Lit 🩵

Since I started reading on this site a couple years ago, this is the only story that revved me up so much I simply had to do something about it (ifykyk). Such beautiful emotions, amazing writing. Thank you for this!!!

A classic. I have read this for years and keep coming back to it again and again. Thank you.

Awesome!!!! I just loved this one. You do a great job in character and scene development. And now you are gone! Please return to us with more of your amazing talent!!!!! Thanks

A favorite to reread.

Fantastic

Such an erotic story.

So easy to know you are a sensuous female. THANKS

Reread for the upteenth time - absolutely fabulous!

I am rereading this story often.

10 out 10 for enjoyment, of porn that has ...heart.

The complexity of the story and characters are skillfully kept intertwined. The ending is not rushed in the least, and does not even seem like an ending, but more of a promise of things to come.

Slow progression and extremely sexy

BJD

This was great, thank you! You kept things going throughout the entire story. Just, wow!

Thank you again.

I enjoyed it very much; it was as planned very entertaining and sexy.

I have one negative, and that is about Diane, She was so self centered and selfish, she must have balls, I am sure she is a guy.

please keep writing!!

Noticing that the previous comment was pretty recent, I assumed this beautifully

written work was new as well, and wondered how I could possibly have missed it. What an awful shock to realize you posted just three stories fifteen years ago!

I hope you still read these comments and know that you are admired and appreciated. I'm on the back side of 75, and have come to understand what it means to leave one's inspiration for posterity in the hope it will be found adequate years down the road. Your work is timeless.

Nice

I come back every few months to read this story and it’s still 10/10

i love this story so much. have read it multiple times over the years.

Great story . Needed to se lawyer totally surrender and submit and do her addistant

Indeed, a most excellent story with unbridled love developing and gradually unfolding for Jess and her lover!

Such a thrill to read……always hoping. for a breakthrough for Jess…and it did….

Such a romantic conclusion….whats next?

I need more of this story……

With 726 comments on the story at the time I'm writing this, I'm sure there's nothing for me to add. But I'd still like to thank you for this lovely, lovely, lovely story <3 <3

Six stars.

This should be on goodreads

I still think of this as one of the best love stories I've read in a long time.

This is the most wonderful stories of falling in lust and then in love I've ever read. I loved living Jess' life and love as she told her tale.

I'm so happy they remain lovers, in love. I hope they always are.

Thank you for this truly beautiful story!!

Amazing story must have made me cum 4 times... I would love to hear the other lady's side of the story too am sure it would be just as erotic Bravo

What a fantastic story. I absolutely loved it.

That has to be one of the most beautifully narrated stories I have read. Romantic and erotic, you delved into Jessie's insecurities as perfectly as you described her oral abilities and her fantasies.

Granted this was Jessie's story, but I missed not knowing Diane's thoughts as she was first seduced into being helped, and then into what turned out to be an addiction.

I see you have not written for many years, so we shall have to make do with the three stories you have left behind.

Kudos to your editor if you used one. Bad spelling or grammar jars me but your story flowed perfectly from beginning to end

Thank you.

Amazing! As well as turning me on it made me well up! Just amazing

Wonderful Story!! Please more!

Well done!

That was so beautiful and erotic, thank you for telling this story.

Wonderful story that was beautifully written.

Please write more!

Symbiosis.

Amazing

This ia extraordinary piece of writing. One of my very best favourites. Red Emerald, more please. The next chapter….

I’ve read this story many times. Gorgeously romantic and powerfully erotic. I find it captivating and keep coming back for more.

A lovely story!

Thank you!

Wonderful, simply wonderful. My sweet Helen suggested it to me, and she was oh so right. I hope the author returns with more. It is so sad talented writers appear then vanish. Please come back.

I loved this story, my first read, but it won't be my last I will come back to it time and again.5*

A second time reading this fantastic story.

I'm sorry to say it, but there's a story called "Inertia Intersected" by the ironically-named Legitimately_Lauren, whose chapter 2 sex scene plagiarizes heavily from this story, often word for word. I reported it on that page.

I first read this story many years ago, when i first started reading erotica. It captivated me then, and it still captivates me to this day. This is, without doubt, the best story on this site.

Stunningly beautiful and erotic.

Fantastic. The long build-up to their final love making was so exciting. You had me worried there near the end when the office expansion arose. I am so glad it ended as it did. Imagine all that sexy interaction between them before they finally kissed! It was so easy to imagine Jess making love to Diane; I could almost feel their bodies merging. Women are so damned good at making love to each other. Thank you for writing such an erotic story. I can understand why there are so many comments as so many have gotten enjoyment from your effort.

I love this. Amazingly erotic and romantic. Please come back nd write morw.

Very good story, great build up of sexual tension and emotion. Well done

I'm a sucker for angsty looks and subtle body language - you described both so well. Terrifically erotic story and great writing. Well done.

Very, very good, sensuous, sexy, loving warm and fuzzy all in one go, well done.

I honestly think this is the best story I have ever read on Literotica. So extremely well written. Thank you!

That was the best story I’ve ever read in my life, I’m crying because it was so endearing, the emotions, the build up!!! Spectacular honestly wow.

Absolutely awsome, grippong, enthralling. The best ff story I saw on this site.

I never wanted this to end

Quite beautiful

Excellent story. Thoroughly enjoyable. Why are your stories dated 2009. Time you wrote more stories.

Hall of fame material, thank you.

True Love, between a Man & Woman or Woman & Woman is Beautiful (I am sure I am actually a Tall Beautiful Lesbian with a killer Body just trapped in a fat old Man’s Body). Love the way you laid out this story, the feelings you describe and the Physical component is very well written.

Back for another reread. Author, I hope you are doing well and know how much your readers appreciate you. I want to like, send you money or something, because it feels like you’ve given me such a gift.

An absolutely charming journey for both of them.

Needed more than a 5. Lovely quiet and persistent seduction

Wow, we need the other perspective too.

BEST story I have ever read. Congratulations and the very best to your continuing relationship!

Love This story.. Very erotic

What a wonderful read. Thoroughly enjoyed the journey.

Wow! Amazing read. Thank you.

The kiss! And more than anything, the relief of them finally TALKING at the end. You had me on the edge of my seat!

excellent.

i wish i was her.

this was and still is my fav story on this website!!! keep up the great work!

The most erotic story I have ever read! I was so turned on I had to read it to my lover! We took lots of breaks to make love just like the story!

Best regards,

Kathy

Being a Jessica myself who also likes being called Jessie ...... well you can imagine how pleasing it was to read this excellent sexy and moving story.

I need to find a Diane of my own, my boss who is lovely, is very happily married.... oh well!...sigh!

BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!!!

Desire, passion, longing to say yet afraid to speak. The emotion leads to a great ending. You are a Master at expressing emotion in your story.

I’d love to hear some of this from Diane’s perspective!

13 years later and it's still good.

Brilliant writing!

Brava!

Great story and well written. Definitely an all time favorite.

Going in my saved list. The most erotic Lesbian story ever.

Fantastic writing in all aspects. Loved it &am sorry there’s nothing higher than a 5 stars to give.

Bill S.

Thank you...

Extremely well written, articulate, page turning story! Very erotic too!!

The character development and the transition to a loving relationshlp

I f*cking love this story

I have come back to this story for years. Still holds up!

Omg, what a beautiful romantic story … and true as well which makes it wonderful!

A very enjoyable reading experience, thank you for sharing.

The thing is, I happened to randomly click on this after checking another author’s favourites. I can see why. Five pages later I’m grateful for the little gems that life throws us, including the opportunity to find this beautiful story. Wow.

5 stars and favourited!!

OMG - What a beautiful and wonderfully told story. So romantic, so damm erotic - deserves more than 5 Stars.

This is a story i will read over and over. Thank You

Jennifer

This is a beautifully written romance story, of which there are far too few on the site. Marvelous story-telling from start to finish. Five stars.

After years and years... Still the best story!

11/5. Will read again.

If it weren't for the fact that I know how wild real life can be, I'd have a hard time believing this is based on a true story. Glad to hear these guys are happily together still!

Even if it were pure fiction, it doesn't change the fact that this was a really well crafted, steamy story. I love the inverse order of intimacy, it emphasizes the importance of the little touches. If I were the couple involved, I would feel honored to have their story written with such skill and dedication. Well done!

This will always be my favorite story on this site.

I always come back to this story. I would kill for dianes pov

Well written love story and a glimpse of the passion and lust turning into love. Great read.

Amazing read, just wow!

Amazing, my second read and turned on once again.

I love lesbian love stories, but often breeze quickly through the sex scenes (because they make me sad that I will never know such intimacy). But this is hot, hot, hot. WOW!

One of the best ever. Putting love into it is genius. I knew what was going to happened but the pace was perfect, not too fast. This might be fiction but it certainly has been real life millions of times.

This was such a good love story! I like how Diane and Jessica fell in love with each other. I’m pretty sure this was the second time I’ve read this story and I still love how it went

This kinds of stories make me hope for one of my own. Thank you for writing this beautifully and thank you to the couple for sharing their lovely story.

True lesbian stories are the best especially when it ends up like these pair of sexy babes. What a story, I read it twice and still intrigues me, I love it because of the reality and subject matter and not an imaginative case although they also make a good read too.

Amazing. Great build up...I want this in real life. I was anxious for Jessie; could feel her nervousness. My go to story to get off... beautiful

Great story. Nicely written.

Omg this was... Amazing.