by RedEmerald
I couldn't stop reading this story everytime I start to read it! even though I have already read it like a thousand tmes!! You really are awesome! Thanks for sharing and I am still hoping that I could read some more from this lovely story before I die!! Fingers cross!!😁
I have just re-read this story. It's still as sweet and touching like the first time I'd read it. Just beautiful! Thank you for sharing with us :)
Fantastic story = I wish I had found it earlier.......I would love to be (albeit a male} the assistant serving his boss in such a way!!!
I absolutely loved this, has me wanting to be on the boss or employee side! So freaking hot!
Oh my god. That was a fantastic story!. Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing and sharing it.
It was even better this time through.
This is the definition of a love story.
And a darn good tutorial.
thank you
Ah, oh... the first sight, touch and scent of her accidentally-found panties; the first daring taste of her lips. What a beautifully-told story about the most erotic thing there is: lesbian sex!
Such a wonderful, beautiful story. I'm so addicted to it..I re-read it every now and then because I love it so much! The writing is great. And the development and emotions of the characters are spot on. I just...it's all so good. There are no words to describe how much I love this story.
Wow wow wow. This is one of the most discriptive, sexiest novels I have ever read. I didn't want it to end! Can you do some kind of sequel...from Diane's POV please?. You are truly amazing!
I've now read this story several times and I can still say - OH MY GOD. Easily the best story I've ever read.
Perhaps it would also be interesting if we see from Diane's perspective!! Can you please write another version through Diane's point of view? :)
One of the greatest stories of this site. Had me almost bursting and the floor dripping. Real life tells better stories than the best fiction. A good writer to write them up is still needed, though... a great thanks to the skillfull compilation that has been done.
of multiple reads...just as good every time...what a love story - thanks!
If not the best certainly one of the best love stories I have had the pleasure of reading in any genre. Will enjoy reading more of them. A love such as this is seldom found in any relationship. Makes it all the better.
Keep up the excellent work.
Gordon
I have read your story for the 3rd time and I loved it every single time. You have a way of drawing me into the story. I hope there are more stories to read from you as I can't get enough.
Keep writing as you have a gift.
I badly need a good read these days; as I was surfing the net for free books I thought maybe I could check out some topics that interests me and not merely random books that some readers suggest. I came across the site and typed lesbian and yours is the most loved story so I clicked it, and I was hooked. The story was sensational, and I was contemplating how beautiful Diane must be for Jessica to do what she did. I, imagining myself in such situation doing the same thing blows my mind.
The best part is, you wrote it vividly that I was surprisingly feeling the emotions in the story as you would perhaps want to convey to your readers. I applaud such writer because more than a beautiful story is a writer's talent to bring that beautiful story to life. Good luck to you! And please write more.
This story is everything I could only dream to have with another woman. I have never been able to find a woman that would love me like these two did. It is all in good time though. This story actually brought me to tears, I wish there was more to read.
This turned me on so much I get to the third page trying not to masturbate but gave it it got really hot hehe I love it :3
I think I fell in love with your characters while they were falling in love with Each other.
Very well written and for it to be a true story is mind blowing!!
Beautifully written, highly erotic and an edge of the seat (Like Diane is when Jessie's licking her) tale! Loved every bit and leaked copious amounts!
Read numerous times and it just gets better. Do you have a follow up story on the two lovers if so what is the name. Ron. Cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
This is my favorite story I can read it over and over and not get bored. This is a masterpiece beautifully written savoring each day until the end. Just simply amazing!
You captured the thoughts and emotions of two people in a challenging situation beautifully. Electrically charged, well-paced, and deliciously sexy throughout. A truly wonderful story, thank you.
Loved the story, loved them.....was touched and delighted. Thank you.
Really loved it.
Thanks I just was caught up I this till the end and could feel the love. Thank you
I have read and re-read this love story and I only hope that you will keep this story line going. This is a beautiful story, well written and so very erotic. I would love to see this going into the future with main characters experiencing more of their love for each other.
In my own opinion they do not need anyone else but themselves and I think the story line has so much more to give.
An amazingly wonderful story. Well written and kept me rivited.
Oh my, what a great story. The writing is fabulous. I enjoyed every bit of it
wow, this was beyond amazing. I've been an erotica reader for a long time, but kinda avoided lesbian sections because the stuff you find there is often really bad.
this though; hands down one of the most heartwarming, sexy and all-around great stories. Brilliant!
I'm also happy for the couple. :D If this story is anything to go by they must have amazing sex. :P
Oh my god, that was beautiful. Good pacing, writing, story, all of it. The fear of showing emotions and the moment of vulnerability towards the end, too, just make my heart ache in dozens of ways. It's so genuine. Hiigh quality piece of work.
Just a really really great story from start to finish. Thank you so much. When Jessie slipped on the harness, I knew this was the perfect story for me. I wish them all the happiness in the world, and thanks for letting us share their experience!
Just wanted to thank you for that terrific story. I really enjoyed that. The way you built up the story gradually without letting it get boring was superb. It really touched me. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
This was a really good read. I am now adding this to my personal collection and I'm now off to have a look at your other stories, too. Kudos! :))
Because of this story I am now hopeful that I will find love, I can't put into words how I feel at this moment but, this story brought happy tears to my eyes, I don't fully understand why, but I am grateful to have had the privilege of reading this.:-)
Incredibly written! Haven't read a good erotica in a long time.
Not sure if I believe it was true though...
What a well written story. A true one at that. Glad to read the foot note that they are still together. It is so wonderful to be able to feel what others experience. Great job. thanks
This story was extremely erotic and romantic. Had me at the edge of my seat, and I'm a straight woman. Good job!
I really enjoyed reading this a lot. I'm a straight women and it was hot..
It felt like deja vu reading this. I'm pretty sure I've read the same storie, word for word except for their names on fanfiction.net written for Bella/alice under twilight and rated m. But other than that, awesome story
What an amazingly hot story! ...and that much of it might be true made it even more exciting. I am so much like a Jessie in my own life and easily find more enjoyment in pleasuring my girlfriend than being on the receiving end. Some day I would love to help my girlfriend at work prepare for a meeting like Jessie helped Diane. Thank you for giving me such a wonderful idea!
This was an amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed every minute. I couldn't wait to get home to my sexy partner of 6 years and jump her bones! Yumm please write more. The story had me captivated.
I really really loved this. the first story i ever read on this site.
This was a fascinating read. Much thought and detail without being trashy or vulgar. Tastefully done and I want more..... Please...
I do prefer stories with a man involved but this was great nonetheless! And so very well written, a real pleasure to read.
Incredible story. The best I have ever read, anywhere, on any site or in any book. You have amazing talent and skill. I could taste and feel every word you wrote. Simply BRILLIANT.
Firstly, I am so glad to hear your friends are happy together. And secondly, while this was a very sexy story; the structure, plot and sensuality you provided was captivating. Thank you for sharing. And thank 'Jessie' and 'Diane' for letting us hear their love story.
I absolutely love this I ran across it a few years ago and again today. It's beautiful and brings me back to my experiences with my ex girlfriend who left me. Just an amazing story well written. I love it!
This is one of only three stories on this site that I have read multiple times over the years, and still moves me. This is a classic that will never get old.
RedEmerald... I read this story again not too long ago. My god, it left me shivering and so jealous. To think you wrote all five of your stories in 2009 and none since is just... well, those who enjoy your work feel cheated I suppose. That's said with no idea what happened - if you had to or just chose not to write any more.
I'll end with this... thank you so much for writing "Lovers." It's beautiful and so very well done. I do a little writing and I pray one day I'll be as talented as you!
Five stars, voted up because this deserves better than a 4.83. :)
My name is Diane and I am also a lawyer. It's as if your story is speaking to me.
Please please please PLEASE write a continuation of this story. I want to read about JESSIE getting pleasured by Diane- who I'm guessing would be a "rookie" at this? This story is SO unfinished! It was absolutely exquisite though!!!
This story is heart breakingly beautiful and really damn erotic at the same time. Thank you so much for writing and sharing!!
What a beautiful, sensual and well-balanced story. I've read this a number of times and each time it gets better. Brilliant story-telling.
Please write more
There are some stories in this genre that I read over and over; this is one of them. It mixes all of the desired elements, but in the end, is just a love story. My ever-lasting compliments.
it is a beautiful. story and top in my heart
I ve read it twice and could not find a lose strain.
hello Red Emerald. your story here is sensual and in a way exciting. I found myself in the position of Jessie which had me reading the tale from beginning to end. I had to take a break between (work) sessions and actually looked forward to carrying on. Your description of the love making was as if you personally tpok part in this. :-) All the best and perhaps we shall write again. (messelerpferdchen@yahoo.co.uk).
thanks
Wow! This story is so beautiful. I was wet the whole time i was reading it. I kept on hoping it would go on and it would... Best story i have ever read!
Oh my God that story was so amazing! I loved it to the core. What great ladies they must be.
I read this story a few years ago, had bookmarked it, lost track of it when my old PC died; and then had to read thousands of stories to find it again. So worth all of the time spent Thank you !!!.
I have no words for this.. It's just wow... I've never thought to share any of my findings on this site with anyone that KNOWS me but I will definitely be sharing this because its just WRONG not too. Thank you, for taking the time out to produce this and please continue to write. Thank you.
I've never been touched by a story enough to leave a review on this site, but this story was moving. I found myself connecting to these two women as if I had known them all my life. I was so attached to these two characters (people) in a way that I can cheer knowing they found such a beautiful love. You did such an amazing job telling their story. You have a true talent.
Amazing really is an understatement, a well written and moving story of two women who finally find a wonderful relationship. You make me want to be a woman so I can experience this kind of love, caring sensual and passionate. The final consummation of their love is brilliantly told. I am so pleased they continued and are still together after ten loving years.
"Shut up and love me, Jessie." That made it for me. What made me even happier is that they became a loving couple 10 years later. Beautiful, 10/10.