All Comments on 'Lovers Without Realizing It'

I don't know how experienced an author you are, RedEmerald, but this is one of the most loving, sensitively written examples of the genre that I have ever read. As an account of a real-life situation, you can sit back and feel very proud. This is the first time I have ever felt moved to leave a comment anywhere on this site. Thank you.

I HONESTLY HAVE NO IDEA HOW YOUR GOING TO FOLLOW THIS UP.

A delightful story, perfect amount of tension, beautiful detail and full of love. Thank you.

I very, very seldomly am impressed enough with a story to rate it, let alone rate it with all stars. Your story was magnificent; the grammar and spelling and word choices were all commendable. Some stories are written so poorly (obviously without the aid of spell-check) that I give up reading them. Yours flowed very well and kept my interest through the end. Thank you for this gem!

Absolutely amazing writing, I couldn't stop reading for a second. I could actually feel the emotion and the tense moments in some of it that had me biting my lip and being super nervous at some points and happy for Jess ^^.

U made me cum with my new slave receiving a hot spanking on her pussy

Loved this story very much...great writing!

Heartfelt and just all in all a damn good read. Loved how unique and fresh each depiction of oral sex managed to be. Diane got it good, that's for sure!

I keep coming back to this story because it is so good!

i culdn't stop myself from cumming while reading it.. i almost felt like jessie's tongue n lips were in mine rather than daine's..!! d best story.!!

loved the story, ive already cum while reading it twice n may even get another from it!

loved the writing style - and found her addiction to oral so captivating! loved the initial reluctance from diane. so nicely setup.

The story line is truly amazing, something i have always fantasized about. And not to mention the sex ... like ... wow ;)

Love It ∞ x100

skittle_lover (:

This morning my desire was to experience some lesbian love story.......As a man it was with thrill I loved your story.... You got my attention and thrill of wanting to take care of business as your very entertained me...I must admit my favorite thrill was the erotic coming together, And the pleasure you and Diane found in those thrilling orgasmic moments... I could almost tastily envisage it.... You did me right by putting it together in that manner...GOOD JOB and beautifully expressed...

that was so beautiful. i'm so glad they're still together!

This was a really fantastic story.

Very well written and with an extrememly emotional storyline.

Probably one of the best stories that I have read on here becasue of the emotions involved and not just the sexual part of the sotry.

Keep up the great work!

Beautiful sexy ...I want this.

Best story I've read yet! Keep it up, this was amazing.

It's a good thing I don't smoke; I'd need a cigarette after reading that! Wow! I could replay those images in my head over and over until I had to take care of business. I love the emotional conflict and the byplay in a work context.

Not usually a lover of the 'Lesbian Sex' genre, being only an 'inadequate' (?) male, but this was very nice indeed. Perhaps the 'real life' comments made it work for me more than usual, but an engaging, well written story whether true or fantasy. Well worth, I think, the 5 star vote that I awarded. Love is love, regardless of the gender of the people involved.

...so beautifully written and exciting too! There are not enough words to explain how much I love this story!

An absolutely fabulous portrayal of a great love story. Please tell your friends who this story is based on that I wish them the best and that I truly hope that their love will last their liifetimes.

Even though I was a regular in this site, today I created an account in this site to thank her and send a feedback to the talented author.

Hope to see more of her contribution.

Great work. Turned me on for a complete day.

This was brilliant! Kept me on the edge of my seat wanting more! My breathe was taken away through the whole story. Love the build up of the story and the climax at the end! Please write more!

I came sooooo quick fuck u bitch

I don't know how many times I have read this story, but every time I read it I get the same pleasure. The story was very beautiful, and sexy. I love this story it is by far my favorite.

I am a heterosexual female and started hating Diane but was drawn in and could not stop reading. I even hated her for what it seemed like she was treating Jessica. I felt her pain, I really did. I didn't think I would but it was so well written and the tension built just right. Glad I read it now. Kept thinking of myself and the way I can't orgasm almost wondering if I need that too.

Although a devout male heterosexual, I found your story to be a very satisfying, well written, and very sexy. I loved the tension that you built, and the very descriptive way that you told what was definately an ardent love story, although unknown at the time to the participants. A great read. Thank you

This is definitely my favorite story. I was pretty much drooling the entire time I read it. I love that it's actually a real story, which makes it even more romantic, and SEXY. I hope those two are still enjoying each other as much as they did during this beginning stage.

Great read, especially being about two who are a real life couple. Look forward to reading more of your writings.

a loving and well written story that would equal any of the best seller" novels.

Wow. Simply fantastic!

That was amazing! One of the best stories I've ever read, good job!

This was great. One of the best I have ever read.

this story was awesome, i had never came across such a beautiful story. i adored the ending !!!

Beautiful story, eloquent writing. Fantastic job!

Your story is so well thought out, beautiful and creative. You truly have a gift. Keep Writing!

your story is the perfect combination of sexy and romantic.

This story was perfect to get me wet before I began to watch some hard core lesbo porn.. Bravo!

I come back now and again and still just as touching. Like visitng a special friend. Thanks.

This is still one of the best love stories written

That's about the only word I can think of. A real story, well written and enormously erotic. Bravo!

Couldn't stop reading this once I began - fantastic tempo all the way to the end.

You have given not only a beautiful, endearingly romantic tale, but also one of incredible eroticism and sexuality. It touched me deeply, and caused me to touch rather deeply as well... thank you, and please continue to write more.

What a lovely tale!

Its one of the very few occasions when a sequel would spoil break the spell.

A magnificent story and worthy of saving and rereading!

Your work is an art. Amazing. Drawn in at every moment. Stay inspired :)

This is quite an inspiring story, and I loved every moment. the detail in every scene really made their feelings for each other clear. So I must say well done to you and a hearty congratulations to the couple on their finding each other, even if it were in the most unlikely of ways.

This is probably the best story I've ever read!! If this is, and I expect it is, the way these two people became one, and that they are happy telling us about it, their love, so obvious from page 1, must flare like the best firework ever made.

And I feel very priveliged to have been able to share it.

Have read many stories on here; never left a comment, but this one is so good just had to write and congratulate you on a very well written tale. xx

wow

loved it

just wish we knew more at the end about her boss,

could have been like "girl talk" on the bed after fucking ... you know ?

more about how she felt like, her internal struggles and all ^^

awesome story either way and really really erotic !

Completely in love with this story! And so well written. Thank you!

And very, very hot! Loved it!

If I'm honest I'd say that the story, at first, simply had me wondering about the women that inspired it and I wasn't fully appreciating the scences that were unfolding. But as I continued, the words played in my mind painting a picture of desire, lust, and even love pulling me in and captivating my senses. I believe that you did an amazing job at protraying the emotions and deep seeded longing that resonated in the heart of one, and blooming like an exotic flower, until the petals reached the other. The sea of emotion was heart warming. Good job and thanks for writing. 5 stars.

I can't put into words how much I loved this. The character development was just off the charts. I feel like I knew the two people by the time I finished. I am also sad that it finished. I was hoping it would go on and on forever! One of the best stories I have ever read, not just on this site either. I really, really wanted to read Diane reciprocating the pleasure given to her by Jessie. I hope, against my better judgment since you haven't posted since 2009, that there will be more from you. More specifically, more of this absolutely gorgeous story!

I knew when I started reading that it would be great. How amazing it actually turned out, took me by surprise. Just magnificent! Thank you for sharing this!

You need an agent because your work should be published. I loved every word, you painted such a vivid picture in my mind. Well done!!

Jen :)

likely one of the best lesbian stories I've read yet, i love how it starts as nothing more then a simple quicky for her boss but blossoms into a full fledged relationship

I thought this was a great story. One of the best I've read. Good character interaction developing the growing feelings between the woman and keeping it sweet and real.

Please keep on writing : ) and you'll have plenty of readers wanting to read more of your stories.

I saw that I already posted my comment here back in 2009. Anyway I just want to say that even though I liked it before, I loved it now. I am spamming your page, sorry. I just want to make up for reading-re-reading this story more than I can count without giving something back to the author. So this is my way of giving back. Thank you very much for writing and posting this. I love Jessica and Diane. I love the tone, choice of words, the writing, the characters. A perfect short erotic story.

How many fanfic stories has copied from this. Makes me mad and sad. Anyway, I'm making up for not writing anything even though this has been my story to go to when I want some escape.

It's been a couple of years since the author has posted anything, but I'm still hoping RedEmerald will post a story or two (or three or four... okay you get it) one of these days.

I've read this story when it was first posted, I re-read it again a couple of months ago and for some reason the second time I read this has made me realized what an amazing erotic story this is. And I won't admit to reading it more than twice a week since I started reading it again. It's how much I love it. Thank you so much for writing and posting this here.

P.s.

I keep hoping there's another story from this but from Diane's perspective. I'm not sure. But the love story between this two people has held me in thrall.

I NEVER GAVE MUCH THOUGHT OF LESBIAN LOVE BEFORE. AFTER READING THIS STORY I THINK I HAVE TO RETHINK MY FEELING ABOUT SAME GENDER SEX. LOVE IS LOVE REGARDLESS OF WHETHER IT IS HETEROSEXUAL OR HOMOSEXUA;. GOD BLESS THOSE WHO ARE TRULY IN LOVE.

wow that was one of the best that i have read i loved it keep writing please, awesome characters, it got me so turned on

Unconventional assistance actually is based on this. Do your homework before you comment!

So, um, Unconventional Assistance, anyone?

This was written very well while I like some stories that are only one page I much prefer for them to be longer like this one. I like how the characters are fleshed out and how the story develops. This has a plausible feeling to it I guess in all I'm saying I really liked it.

Such a well written story! Love all of the small details you peppered in. Would love to read more from you :)

Still to me the best love story ever written .

Your descriptions of oral sex inspire me.

I came across this story a few years back and I had really loved it... the way it's written, the story itself. Just amazing!

When I wanted to read it again, I couldn't remember on which site I had found the story. I have been googling true lesbian stories for months trying to find it and raking my brain trying to remember on which site it was but just couldn't find the story until today :) Thank you for sharing it with us. I love it! :)

This was amazing. From start to finish you had my complete attention. All I want to do is keep reading. I wish there were more! Such a beautiful story and I am so glad your friends let you share it. Thank you :)

That was hands down the best story I've ever read on here. The whole time I was reading it I couldn't believe that it was real but the fact that it is made that much better. And I can't even put into words the reaction it pulled from me. Towards the end, when Jessica said "Diane I can't...I can't hold it if you do..." I lost it. I couldn't pull my eyes away from the screen and then when I found out that they're still together today, I shed a tear because their love is so beautiful and special. This comment is really long but you deserve all of this and more. I'm so happy these two women trusted you enough to document this because it was truly stunning! I haven't read a story that is this level of good on here in a long time-you've revived my hope for this website. Thank you so much for posting and once again, this is incredible! If your other stuff is as good as this, then you've got yourself another watcher. So take care Emerald, I was very much in awe.

i usually critique my friends erotic drawings and comics but this was really good i think i might try writing a few. Also i look forward to any more writing you do.

Loved it. Thank-you

That story was incredible. Beautifully written. So true to the female psyche and way of thinking. So realistic. Loved it. Almost moaned when Diane called Jessie "my darling"

This story was much more than I was expecting from a free erotica sight, and I am pleasantly surprised! Thank you and your friend for sharing this. It was very sexy and well written. I don't recall hoping for a happy ending while reading this type of writing before, but I couldn't help but grin at the end. Thanks!

So amazing. It is probably the best thing I've read in a while. Simply amazing. Loved it.

Wow. Actually some romance and not just bang bang gone.

This is what I want to see more of.

Incredibly beautiful. My favourite part was when Diane called her "darling"...

That was soo beautiful i want to find a girl like Jessie to love me like that

This was a beautifully written love story. Plus it was extremely erotic. This is my tenth time reading it over the last year. Thank you for telling their story.

I just finished reading this wonderful story again, for about the fifth time over the years. It continues to be one of my two favorite stories on this site.

I felt every part and im still flushed that was amazing. Thank you for sharing this story. Just WOW!!!

The way you wrote this story was very beautiful, indeed. It didn't sound like an erotc story until those parts, and the rest of it sounds like a regular novel that I would read and love, not that I didn't love the whole thing ;D I wish I had your writing ability.

Best erotic story I've ever read!

I never really thought I liked even somewhat remotely romantic stories, even between two women, until reading this. It's the perfect mix of bittersweet emotion, love, and deep passion. Me being a sex-crazed lesbian, I found the constant sex largely satisfying and in their own way heartwarming. This piece is much appreciated :)

I was totally wrapped up in this love story. Enjoyed it immensely.

I have read this story multiple times and the ending still gets to me. so good.

Actual tears are running down my face. Such a truly lovely story. You wrote it so beautifully :D I feel lucky to have had this story shared with me. Thank you :)

I Cried when i read this becuase this shows it doesnt matter what kind of love there is just as long as there is love everywhere. my whole life i have been dealing with being a lesbian and trying to conceal this sort of feeling that is going on in my head. Gulityness maybe but to read this makes me think that anything is possible for love (: :_)

Oh my god, this is fucking adorable... Shows that love exists in strange places, and it has a way of surprising you in ways you've never thought possible.

Amazing story with a fantastic ending. This story really was more about love than sex and I am glad they are happy together after all these years. Thank you for writing this.

I really enjoyed it

Loved it! From a straight male that very much enjoys lesbian love making stories!

this was an amazing read with and ending so cute it almost made me cry. thank you.

Oh my god......this story was wonderful. I loved it. It reminded me why I am a Lesbian. This story made me come myself so to speak. Made me and my lover have wonderful sex. Again i say thank you for writing this wonderful story.

Thank you...the story was amazing.

This was such an amazing story

As the relationship started out imbalanced and awkward, it was nevertheless engaging and intriguing. Are all loving relationships unbalanced and off kilter at first? The writing progresses gradually and subtly just like life and then the reward of something more comes to conclusion. One word to sum it all up: Lovely.

An incredibly arousing piece of art!!! Well done!