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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great

What a great story, told in a very good way, not losing the reader in pages of senseless stuff that have very little to do with story at hand. Carry on writing.

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I have been writing erotica since 2007 though my main talents are focused on writing in roleplay verses, doing photo editing, and listening to music.