by Decayed Angel
Cleverly written....but one can only hope that you dont really believe in the ending of the story...and if those are your beliefs, then surely the 'bearded man' and his lover could have happily proceeded to hell and continued...where I am sure, they would have met up with a lot of people who had believed in the 'right god' and 'gone to the right church'.
I'm not sure if that is the word I want to use, but it is the word that came to me. I think this was a very well written piece and completely different then most anything I have read. Great job and thank you very much for sharing it with us. ~ Red
message in this excellent(if unusual) story must be obvious to anyone but a politician or radical cleric.Why not send them all a copy though just in the unlikely hope that they may?
Damn fine writing - even better concept.
I'm more inclined to believe the world ends not with a bang, but a whimper. *shrug* your way is more fun, for sure.
Wonderful irony and great use of imagery. Tho I hope the world does not end in such a case.
Unbelievably sad and thought provoking. Brilliant writing full of pathos ......
Unbelievably sad and thought provoking. Brilliant writing full of pathos ......