All Comments on 'Loving Daddy'

I like it alot good going I love reading this and keep on writting more great storys

I LOVE IT!! It's raw, but stays true to form. Not too dirty, but kinky enough to keep people interested. Kept me on the edge of my seat, wet the whole time.

A fantastic and thrilling story had me hooked soooooooo very sexy thank you and keep writing and keep those sexy stories cuuuuuuummmmmmmmming great stuff

You did it again, your writing style is stupendous!!!!!!! Dont you dare change unless its for the better. This old man really enjoys good written sex stories.

I lost count of how many times I came, I love your dialogue, it's so hot and makes me sooooo wet. Keep those stories cumming.

Your dialog is stilted and repetitive. You need to get somebody to correct your spelling and grammar. "Cuming" is not a wordl 'She lie under him..." should be "she lay under him." The whole story is implausible. Get the help you need.

Incest is the best thing in the world,hope to hear more,and old on young is the best

Nice story! needs revised though some spelling and gramatical errors.

Very hot.