by Risktaker48
This was a great read, well crafted. There is plenty of erotic content, but (a nice change on this site) you have also made it romantic, with sensitive feeling. Congratulations on your writing skill.
and sad
I wish I had read this prior to Substitute For Dad, It makes more sense now.
However I was immediately drawn in because of the great writing and tender way the story was presented.
Cheers, Dude!
An absolutely delightful story, well told and a darn good read. The character development, plot, grammar, syntax and spelling were generally fine, but you do have a few annoying little errors which more careful editing would correct. Altogether, a fine job. Do keep up the good work!
great story , i can relate to it so much in many ways even though i am married
a realtionship with a younger true friend is wonderful