All Comments on 'Loving Emily'

by Risktaker48

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well told romantic story

This was a great read, well crafted. There is plenty of erotic content, but (a nice change on this site) you have also made it romantic, with sensitive feeling. Congratulations on your writing skill.

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
very heart warming

and sad

I wish I had read this prior to Substitute For Dad, It makes more sense now.

oldwayneoldwayneabout 10 years ago
Excellent!

Quite a beautiful tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great story, but ....

Great story, well written. But a stupid ending!

ansdguyansdguyover 11 years ago
I don't usually read this type of stories...

However I was immediately drawn in because of the great writing and tender way the story was presented.

Cheers, Dude!

erotikoserotikosabout 12 years ago
Nice job, well done!

An absolutely delightful story, well told and a darn good read. The character development, plot, grammar, syntax and spelling were generally fine, but you do have a few annoying little errors which more careful editing would correct. Altogether, a fine job. Do keep up the good work!

kathy2b46kathy2b46about 12 years ago
wondeful

great story , i can relate to it so much in many ways even though i am married

a realtionship with a younger true friend is wonderful

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I've finally started finishing some new stories (too many plot lines in my head), hopefully I will start completing more soon. Most of my writing is fantasy stories at the moment some are based on my own experiences. You dear reader will have to work out which! Thanks in advan...