All Comments on 'Loving Him Ch. 02'

How did you let the story move from Lexan "sketching, outlining his sharp cheekbones and delicate ears, his strong neck and muscular torso" to Max receiving a divinely written super hot blow job. Where's the fire? Your superb pacing went up in flames. Once again I am confused. Max isn't the only one who needs a good drink.

If he had a letter why did he ask lexan about his not bringing any girl home

Because he was trying to get him to say it.

Rushed, too rushed, 1*

I didn't think it was too rushed, maybe a little. The urgency of Max's desire drove the pacing of the scene and it's believable that something could explode like that so quickly. If anything though, the tension could have been built a little more prior by going through the days, weeks, months of Lexan's growing attraction and there could have been some very subtle hints dropped by Max that he felt the same but this was a seriously hot story regardless.