All Comments on 'Loving Ms. Case'

This is a great MILF story. Very well written.

Great story...lovingly told....The only flaw was the coma... a three month coma most often results in moe damage to the mind than you should. I understand the purpose of getting by the 3 months, but I think you could have used a different vehicle, so to speak.

you should have elongated the sex

The sex part should have been longer but the begining was well good

Inasmuch as Kevin had had the accident and was nearly killed a very erotic part of this story would have been that Helen wanted him to impregnate her just in case he ever had an accident again where he did die, that way she would always have had something of him to love.

You have writing chops! Make this part One. Write a part Two occurring more than 3 months later after rehab for that time. She could even assist in the rehab. The daughter could suspect something (she would be jealous the "bitch!"though she didn't really want him, with girls like that it's all about them being center). Finally thank you. For no great obligatory suck & cunnilingus or anal! That can happen (no big fan of ass sex anyhow) later but the first time is all about penetrating slowwwwly while gazing into your lovers eyes intimately watching the effects of the tortuously slow penetration below. Well written.

You have writing chops! Make this part One. Write a part Two occurring more than 3 months later after rehab for that time. She could even assist in the rehab. The daughter could suspect something (she would be jealous the "bitch!"though she didn't really want him, with girls like that it's all about them being center). Finally thank you. For no great obligatory suck & cunnilingus or anal! That can happen (no big fan of ass sex anyhow) later but the first time is all about penetrating slowwwwly while gazing into your lovers eyes intimately watching the effects of the tortuously slow penetration below. Well written.

I enjoyed it greatly. Wish there a little more focus on the sex, but the build up was great

The sex part only lasted one short paragraph with barely any description. Bit disappointing.