All Comments on 'Lowborn Ch. 08'

This has been a very enjoyable tale. Good pacing and character development, and just enough sex to keep it interesting. Very nicely done.

Good job. Thanks for another exciting episode. Good character development. Nice sense of place. I have a good picture of the landscape - which really helps fill out the story.

Mindblind seems to be getting uncharacteristically angry all the time now. Me thinks that the sword is not only enchanted to feel lighter than normal, but make the wielder blood thirsty and stay in a blind rage. I could be wrong but that is the impression I'm getting after the way Indigo reacted to it.

I've been offline for awhile now and come back to find the story finished uploading. Thank you, this was a wonderful present for getting back from out of town.

No kidding, anon. This is known as foreshadowing.

Author's been laying it on pretty thick lately. Indigo says its evil, then mindblind demonstrates that it is magically altered and immediately had ongoing anger issues. Previously the author had taken pains to state that he was in control of his emotions. Yes, it's the sword.

Love this story, with plenty of sex, good plot and setting, and characters that actually evolve a bit during the course of the story. Excellent writing also: the author can set up a scene without drowning the story in over-flowery prose.

Great story, from a master storyteller.

Loving it.

Slight discontinuities at times, but overall a great yarn.

4's & 5's from me for whole series; can't stop reading.