All Comments on 'Luck Be A Lady'

With the fact that my name is Brock adding that much more arousal to the storyline, I found it to be quite enjoyable and very stimulating. I loved it.

I live in the area. Been there done that.Except I'm always with my Wife.Best win was 6 grand at Casino Rama.Exciting story.Keep up the good work.

tooooooooooooooo long.

What a nice change to find something both hugely erotic AND well written! I think you could edit page one for us non-gamblers - but otherwise it's an enjoyable read and a great turn on. Printing it out to read aloud to my fella in bed tonight. Thanks

Although there where a few mistakes. A very well writtenstory! I enjoyed reading it.

I truly enjoyed your writing, but found myself skipping through page three...

Too long, but VERY well written... thank you for an enjoyable read!!! One of the better written submissions, DEFINITELY! (And loved the accuracy of details... I remember standing in front of Planet Hollywood after coming out of the casino)

Great content and very erotic, But for the love of god....please condense this story to something a little more managable.