All Comments on 'Luck Ch. 02'

Sexy, daring and sinfully delicious! The writing is wonderful. I cannot wait for you to continue to the next chapter, I will be patiently waiting. Thanks

You seriously need to look up the meanings of the words 'then' and 'than' because you keep using them incorrectly. Just like the difference between 'to' and 'too'.... smh

It's a good story, but you should definitely get someone to beta your work before you post. The errors distract from the story itself.

Start your engines.

Yupppppppppppppppppppppppppp....now let's roll up our sleeves and get to work.

I would like to introduce you to a new word, "Then."

Please look up its meaning in a dictionary and learn the difference between 'then' and 'than.'

I know they both sound alike but only if you don't listen carefully.

Lol no way

Watching a woman have a full on mental breakdown turns him on, huh? Wow, that is fucking disturbing.

I know it's more than 10 years late, and you probably won't read this, but I just wanted to let you know you have an uncanny way of using exactly the wrong word every time. Your instead of you're, to instead of too, than instead of then, and for the love of god, there is no apostrophe needed to pluralize a word.

Too bad you concentrated on poor grammar. You missed a good story.

In one single line. Has to be a record!

lol ive said it before but ill say it again its always an anon account that says dumb shit or overly nags on grammar. i get it grammar is important but if you can still understand whats being said just deal with it and move on.