All Comments on 'Lunacy Edge Ch. 03'

I missed this story when it began to appear saw it tonight and went back to read from the begining. You are pacing it nicely and building your characters well. Just keep an eye on continuity it is not for nothing they have someone specifically assigned to the task in films. Keep going like this and it will be a most enjoyable read.

Today is the first time i read all of your first three chapters. I have noticed they are a bit short, but i actually think they are well written. You really have potential in this story. Keep up the good work. I do hope you will continue with the next chapter fast :)

I can't wait to find out what happens! Geez that my blood boil too. Lol.