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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 9 years ago
I love...

...that you write in the 1st person! Good style.

tedsgirltedsgirlover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the compliment, it is much easier for me to write in the first person. I try and visuilize what is happening as I write.

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In a relationship, we are both in our 60's, I am bi and he is okay with this. I love sex, watching DVD'S and writing erotic fiction.

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