All Comments on 'Lust and Lingerie'

Very well done for a self-proclaimed beginner. I did notice a few typos ('nipple' instead of 'nibble', for instance), but they didn't really detract from the read. Keep it up and maybe make the next one a little longer, a little more detail in the teasing foreplay.

What a wonderful story. Your storytelling is some of the best I have read. Please write often.

sometimes, short and sweet is the best. you have done it!

Wow! Sunning writing! I loved this story. My only request is that for the next one (you WILL be writing a next one, won't you) you keep some of the lingerie on. I'd love to read your description of stockinged legs wrapped around his waist etc.

Again, great work!

Very Good for the First time. Like the details