by bratcat786
That is the most disgusting thing I have ever read. I can't believe such a story. This isn't even erotic it is disgusting and all the other stories like it should be taken down.
You skated through the story, leaving out alot of details that would have helped flesh it out more, but it's a decent start.
As for the "OMG" comment.... Grow up. If it's "so disgusting" that it and all others like it should be taken down, then -why are you reading it-? Don't push your guilt on everyone else because you read stuff that you're sure Mommy and Daddy would be ashamed of.
No matter how erotic it was suppose to be, it was Rape.
Nothing sexy about it at all. And all too sad that it'll encourage other losers to attempt some thing like this in real life, with real Daughters or fantasy Daughters.
This story was meant to be a fantasy and if you don't like it I'm sorry. It is not intended to encourage this sort of behavoir in real life. I do not approve of that kind of thing in real life. Please, if you don't like this type of story than don't read it. It's very apparent at the beginning of the story how the plot runs, so if you see that than simply don't continue reading.
To the people who left the comments below...News Flash! You are on an erotic story website, getting off on reading stories in the INCEST category. Who the hell are you to judge? It's almost comical! Great story;)
The tittle ppl and the fact its in the incest cat....you knew where it was going so....go cry elsewhere
that was so hot, i love this type of incest fantasy. i roleplay this with my lovers all the time, and they think i'm crazy, but i don't care! ;-)
Ok story, kinda short, still gave me a hardon. Too bad morons don't read the warnings to these storys.
people! come on the human race wouldn't even exist without incest Adam and Eve had sons and daughters and they had to have sex with each other because there was no one else this isn't wrong its just a different perference for some people
I can be honest and say I get off on these kind of fantasys
and this isn't meant to encourage the actual behavior...
If people take it that way then I can guess that wasn't the author's original intent and people just need to back the fuck off of people who like this type of stuff there is something for everyone here go find your own fucking corner of literotica to back into people and leave bratcat786 alone
If you didnt't like a story about incest then didnt you read the title first moron. Good story but way too short, maybe he suffers from premature endings
don't hold back!! make it longer next time.. you got me wett.. but i need more to cum... ;) thanks for writing it.;)
please write more like dad fucks daughter while a baby grows inside her.
or he wants to flaunt that his daughter is also his slut.
in other words, please write more.
I love this story and author-I got so wet i practically slid off my chair when i came. Whew-another hot story that i wish was me n my dad. Stacy18_bi@hotmail.com is me...
it was ok until the "bleeding asshole" part. then it went from incest love to plain and simple, violent rape. plus, the story went too fast. note that this is constructive criticism, not a personal attack.
hmmm it was a good story but you should make sum when the daughter go after the father you should also try some brother sister ones too many ppl think that is real hot. hehe i read a lot so read what i have typed. :)
I would love more detail to this story. I don't like the part where he basically rapes his daughter ass. Thats a major turn off for me, but I enjoyed it.
This is the sickest story I've ever read. How can he rape is own daughter that's so fucking nasty and this disgusting and wrong and I hope this is not true because I'll will report this fuckin disgusting story to the cops can I cant respect a guy who can raped his own daughter that is so fucking disgusting