All Comments on 'Lust in an Elevator'

Vixen. Tease with anticipation of "more and better" things to come. 8-b

Great lead up, well sritten and DAMN sure ready for chapter 2!!!!

Lee

Rubbish

If anyone has written a more erotic story than this, I have yet to read it. Phenominal in all aspects. Perfectly written, Perfectly sensuous, Perfectly...Perfect! 5 Stars 10 might be better.

Prolonged_Debut10

I loved it...your descriptions, everything...made me want to work somewhere that I would have that long an elevator ride to enjoy

You are such a good writer. I can hardly wait for the follow-up chapters of this story.

5 stars on this one as well.

This is a wonderful story, believable, sensuous and you really brought it to life in the fine detail of your descriptions. I'm now very frustrated like Eric, but will save it for later tonight and just delight in your shared fantasy for now...

Looking forward to reading more!

We aint got 75 floors out here, but Torinona has made this exciting and passionate trip believable. This guy is obviously talented, and the lady doesnt need to say anything. These lovers have done a wonderful deed in rather inconspicuous silence, and the author has done this event well. Perhaps most convincing was how she established that they connected at the baseball event, adding credibility to the entire scenario. I cant wait for payback. Nice work, Yankee girl.

Nice quickie!

I do hope so