All Comments on 'Lust in La Jolla Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very enjoyable chapter!

Jerry in Washington State, USA - I was happy to see your new chapter. After over a month, I was wondering if there would be one. I knew chapters would come slower, but just not this slow. I do understand trying to set up future story with details in this chapter would take some extra time. I most look forward to the next chapter, where Maria gets Jake to herself and finally gets her "turn". I very much enjoyed the "calling Jenny" scene and look forward to Jake and Jenny eventually getting together as a couple, if that is your plan. I'm hoping for a happy ending for Jake and Jenny but also realize you might take the story in a different direction. Thanks for a very interesting story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Keep 'em comin'

Surely one of the best stories I have read in literotica. I look forward to subsequent Chapters (post Ch11) Please don't keep us waiting too long.

smuuthiesmuuthieabout 7 years ago
Great dialogue

That last chapter made me laugh out load with Keri telling Amber she doesn't want to hear it, and great character descriptions

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