by anna_leo_
Story progressing too fast. There need to be some buildup. Things are going on that makes the story a bit confusing. How did Tom and Ciel meet? How was Ciel able to escape Tom in the first chapter? What kind of pack does Jace have that Tom was able to sneak onto the property and take Ciel?
Waiting for more dis is really good ur doing great but please continue this series!! I'm loving it
This is rushed even worse than the 1st chapter. Also, how come can anyone, even a vampire, kidnap someone from the bed of a wolf without the wolf noticing? Or even getting to the house inside a compound that is certainly guarded with keen wolf senses.