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The crowd was enthralled too. Some of the people had stopped drinking at the bar, and they were actively engaged in her performance, even though they had to swivel their neck to see her.
Leif was familiar with Joplin, and he recognized that she'd switched it up and was adding ad-libs. It was then, that he realized that she tested material out in this Karaoke Bar, before she'd do it live before her regular audience in the nightclub. She was so damn talented.
Damn talented and scrumptious. His mouth watered.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 10 years agoThis story is great all those comments about race and what the characters said about race are ridiculous...its an interracial story RACE HAS TO COME UP!!
and besides its fiction!!! Relax and just enjoy the story.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThis is scary! It's like your writing about my life right now! Down to every detail( except location) haha nice story!
mich80newalmost 11 years agoAuthorHi Everyone, thank you for your comments. I appreciated the kind words, and the constructive criticism. Thank you all for following these two on their journey. This is my first real story for literotica, so I appreciate all the love.
Island QT, I re-read my dialogue, and I understand what you mean, about adding the softly after some of the passionate statements that were being made.
I guess I did that because I didn't want it to seem as though they were yelling at each other- but your point is well taken.
islandqtalmost 11 years agobut sometimes the dialogue is a bit much for me and it doesn't match up to the way you describe it in the end. Some of the things they were saying were so passionate I was wondering why you insisted on saying "He said softly or she added softly".
