All Comments on 'Lynn's Journeys Ch. 15b'

This story has been one of the better stories on this site. I am so glad you are going to continue it.

But Love made it worthwhile. Keep up the good work. ^^

Your story and writing is the very best on Lit and now I have finished your last chapters... I just can't seem to find any other writer, although I will keep looking, who writes from the heart and mind the way you do. I was smiling, laughing crying and enjoying your twists and journey so much. Please keep writing more and more! Please? PLEASE?!

...That I'm so glad I found this story. I absolutely loved the whole thing. This'll be one of those stories that I re-read about a million times, I can tell :) Thank you for sharing it with us :)

One say!

It is the best storie that I have read in lit.com since I joined last year. It is all the fairy tales come true, your portrayal of Alice and Lyn were excelent. The places you visited, the bars you ate in and the flora you described. I was there with you, tasted the foo, specially the calamari and the beer. I could even smell the flora. The love and sorrow exchanged between Ali' and Lyn, at times was heart warming and tear jerking, brought plenty to my eyes. To sum it all up. It was bloody excelent. Excuse the colloquial english.

Stefanus

Homo sapien

This is an excellent story. I plan on reading the rest of your work. Hope your write some more at some point.

WOW, loved the ride. I felt I was there with them all the way. I wonder now why you stopped after the next episode. I urge you to continue, please.

I thought this series was great. I am a guy and always love to know how woman Love it when being "Loved". I learned a lot and will hopefully continuing to please my Loves to their heights.

Keep up the good work,well crafted erotica,enough to keep ones attention,but not too detailed to be repetitive.All in all very enjoyable,look forward to checking out the rest.Again keep writing

Once I started, I couldn't stop. I look forward to reading the rest of your submissions. Thank You for sharing.

IDB

I JUST STARTED READING THESE CHAPTERS. I TRULY LOVE THEM. COULDN'T STOP UNTIL I READ THEM ALL.

GREAT JOB!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and you write it so well. Looking forward to the continuation.

Mmmm I love the detail you put in your work. Please come back. I hope you are well.

I very much enjoyed "journeying" with Lynn, a good story! And that's from a person who was once a Journeyman Plumber, I "upgraded" to Master Plumber longer ago than I care to say!

I thought the characterization was excellent, The sex seemed organic to the plot rather than an adjunct added merely to titillate.

Excellent story I enjoyed it all the way from start to finish..