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Anonymousover 1 year agoRegardless of prior stories, "...by books", but spelled the word correctly twice more in the same paragraph?!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoProof-reading.
Too many typos, misspelled and wrong words, took away from the story. Before submitting have someone proof-read everything. Could have been a 5 Star story!
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