by fire_breeze
You are a true artist, using words to paint a canvas. I could almost feel myself in the room with her, or you. You are a very talented lady. I'm looking forward to reading more of your art.
It makes me want to know what the two of them do afterwards. And watching her in my mind and hearing her moan and gasp, is very sexy. Keep writing and posting please. I would love to read much more from you.
Beautifully written and very lyrical. I very much enjoyed reading it.
Your writings are following my own desires....I loved this!! Well done :)
this is grand. It is technically perfect and reads like poetry. Very impressive work done in an incredibly few words.
eager to read the the prequel ....? or maybe the sequel and then the prequel ?.....i know you will share the right step that needs to be taken ......with all us CAPTIVATED readers
Dearest Author,
I've insisted that you were a wordsmith of the highest order, and this bit of perfection proves my case! The story pulls the reader into your magical world of poetic prose that paints the loveliest of word images. Oh, to be the admirer in the dark corner and to watch this sensuality unfold like a tender moonflower and then to drink of her nectar...Mmmm
SxRx