All Comments on 'Maggie's Change of Heart Ch. 05'

I liked the first three chapters a lot, but thought that these kind of became an "any excuse to have more sex" kind of story that lost sight of their closeness.

I suppose you are right. This was a friend of mines story that they had me write for them. It did start out good, but I sort of lost interest in it, and so it became somewhat sloppy. Plus, I never finished it.

Thank you for reading though, and your honesty as well. This genre isn't MY genre...I started out writing such as a way of release, and long stories such as this one, where I am "obligated" to add more then one part, sort of loose their excitement for me. I like short and sweet, one shot stories, in this genre. The excitement, need, and connection between the characters stays stronger that way, I think.

Also, I started to feel that I was writing not for myself, but just to have something to put up, which is no good at all...and also why I have not posted anything in quite some time, as well as I have been working on some other writing. But thank you for reading. I'm not sure if "commenters" check for response or not. I don't know how that works...and I have not been on in such a long time, but I have wondered if my stories were still getting attention. Thanks again for your coment.

I really loved your Chapters1-3 but would have really nice if it ended with just the girls and not with the two guys. The emotions of love was degraded. Hope you could end it right.