All Comments on 'Maggie's Gift'

by _Lynn_

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DesertPirateDesertPirateover 14 years ago
Amazing

That was a beautiful story with an unexpected ending. Very good and perfect for the season.

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
Absolutely fantastic!

Thank you very much for providing us with a pleasant interlude. Reading your story gave me a very high goal to shoot for. Excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I cried

I must say you are definitely my favorite author on here, perhaps anywhere. With this story you made me cry. Not sad tears, the good tears where something touches you so deeply it has a lasting effect. You deserve to win this contest hands down, best of luck.

DG HearDG Hearover 14 years ago
Great Job!

Wonderful story Lynn. Very heart warming. I could taste the stew and smell the homemde bread. The best to you in the contest.

With very high respect

DG

PassionatePattyPassionatePattyover 14 years ago
What a gift

and it is in your talent for writing! Thank you for a wonderful story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You NEVER fail!

I devoured EVERY word of your story! I loved it! It's facinating when there is alot of conversation in a story and boy Mistress Lynn did you deliver! I loved the story, the plot and the references to "Him"...WELL DONE! (Beau)

Austin8Austin8over 14 years ago
Very Romantic, Lynn!

My kinda holiday story, thanks Lynn!

bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Really a fine story

Brilhant moments and three interesting characters.

Poizon69Poizon69over 14 years ago
Hello MistressLynn

You probably don't rememeber me but you gave me some advice in the Forum section. Someone esle in the forum called you 'Saintly' well this story just reinforces it for me. Nice story MistressLynn. And a nice Christmas story. I am not in the least religous and don't really hold with the idea of Christmas but I can see this type of thing happening. So thanks again for your advice and thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good writing, mistress

and I'm sure you never forget Poizon! Me an him got something in common-asslickinpete.

sethpsethpover 14 years ago
Great Story

I enjoyed it! Good luck in the Contest!

wantsomefun1951wantsomefun1951over 14 years ago
You captured the essence...

of the giving part of Christmas. This was a beautifully told story of love. The romance between the couple was beautiful, but the love they showed their visitor was truly inspiring. My hat is off to you, dear lady. Congratulations on a well-earned win.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
among the best I've ever read

I have often delved into the story section, but this is one of the very best that I've read. No wonder it was awarded first prize! I lost my wife 5 years ago, on Dec. 18 (tomorrow, local time here) which was my 81st birthday. I identified with Nick. I would like to write more, but my eyes are affected by tears, so I'll just close with a sincere, Thank You to the writer, and hope for more of the same calibre sometime.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Best story I've read in a long time.

As the title says, this was the best story I've read in a long time. It kept me riveted the entire time. The way it was blended so well, the story flowed from my computer screen straight to my soul. It touched me in some way that I don't know how to describe, thank you for that. I know the voting is over and I'm truly sorry I didn't get a chance to vote for your story, but I am forever greatful to have had the opprotunity to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Thank you

Merry Christmas

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 14 years ago
Great story

Superb writing talent. Congratulations on winning the 2009 Winter Holiday contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful Story

I loved the story. Thank you so much! Hope you have a Merry Christmas.

Rthawk10

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Touching story.

Well written. Perfect for a sleepless night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
super

A magical tale, well told. Thanks for sharing it with me. HP

AlitheAlitheover 14 years ago
Congrats

First place... you deserved it! Such a sweet and sad tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
heard a bit too much

Truly not an original

have read this in various versions many times over the past 50 years....ought to vote for something original...should not have even made the list.

regards

one silver wolf

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Touched my heart

Now, although there are already some stories of this kind, however, this has deeply touched my heart. An exciting and yet sad at the end story.

A well-deserved first place.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good Writting is Good Writting

No matter where it comes from, a well written SS is a thing of grace. do not stop

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Brilliant!

I loved this story, very well done to MistressLynn, fantastic work!

txstanfordtxstanfordabout 14 years ago
Going gently

Little wonder this won first prize.

When a writer cares about the integrity of her characters and the intelligence of her readers, the result really should be pretty good.

Here, it's outstanding.

Well done, kiddo.

northlandernorthlanderabout 14 years ago
A Beautiful Story

MistressLynn

Thanks for a beautiful story. Tremendous characters and a beautiful theme. Out there in the world there are lots of Nick's who have been battered by life's twists and turns. Once in a while one of the Nick's is fortunate to meet a Maggie and Steve, people who care enough to make a difference. Thanks for reminding us that helping people is a strength not a weakness

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
full marks!

What a magnificent story! I give it full marks. It was so unusual, and a lovely expression of the Christ-mas spirit. I enjoyed reading it, immensely.

Harry LegHarry Legabout 12 years ago
Beautiful!

I really enjoyed this little gem. Excellent work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Oh my Lord!

A fine story, well-told.

Once again you show we lesser mortals the real craft of writing.

I doubt I'll ever learn to do it write. . . .

Handley_Page

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I'm impressed.

Excellent writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thank you

Prayer: Joys from God in Jesus be with you, around you, from you.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 10 years ago
Inspiring

A great tale. Very heartwarming.

AMoveableBeastAMoveableBeastalmost 10 years ago
Warming in every sense

What a wonderful, uplifting little story. Made my day better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Heart felt story

the writing was so well written I could picture the story unfolding as if I was watching this beautiful gift of helping others. really drew me into this heart warming story great writing .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
That could have been me

I'm a 76 yr old man with tears running down my face. lost my wife and kids.

Maggie was just like my Gran.

Nick....that could have me

MoogPlayerMoogPlayeralmost 9 years ago
Oh My God!

No wonder this one was a contest winner. It ripped my heart out m the roots, but in such a very wonderful way. Great job!!!

MoogPlayer

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Re-read; another lesson

Thank you

hp

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Crying

Read it, with tears in my eyes, overflowed at the end.

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
A beautiful story

and perfect for the season.

thank you,

Happy Christmas

DG HearDG Hearover 2 years ago

Here is my comment 12 yrs ago and it still stands.

Great Job!

Wonderful story Lynn. Very heart warming. I could taste the stew and smell the homemde bread. The best to you in the contest.

With very high respect

DG

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