All Comments on 'Magic'

Like it. Hope you write more longer stories :)

...about the 2 score. I meant to vote it a 5 but something went horribly wrong and I am so terribly sorry. I really liked the story and encourage you to continue writing - maybe an epilogue to their new adventure??

Great story!

I'm really happy that you guys enjoy my story. The feedback and positive votes have really made me push through that negative little voice that whispers in my ear when I sit down to write. I have several ideas that I'm working on and I'm hoping to have another story up soon. :)

I gotta go to the doctor...that twist was so unexpected it threw my neck out!

You need to make more stories I love this one!!!I really enjoyed it!!!

As rare as the creatures in it. Very creative, balanced, flowing, grammatically correct. Brava or Bravo, which ever you are.