All Comments on 'Magnificent'

Good luck with the contest.

Your story really is kinda like mine, hope you do well!

A definite fantasy. I had to read it through to see if he was real or the tree. Still don't know. LOL I walk through the woods but never came across Anne, have to keep looking. Best of luck in the contest

DG

Really enjoyed you story Janie, it was so evocative and descriptive, I could almost smell the forest, a perfect story for the theme. sws

Enjoyed your story. Good luck.

you describe things very well. very vivid.

It was like the title - Magnificent. The story plot, descrpitions were crafted so well. Will there be another chapter? It'll be wonderful to read another chapter. Thanks for sharing.

All the very best for the contest.

Well Jane, you have done it again! A wonderful, sweet, romantic tale and again a successful change of style for you. You are truly a skilful writer and your style, so very, very English. is a delight to read. "Hair the colour of autumn conkers" is an excellent example. However, I doubt that many of your readers know what a conker is! Best of luck in the competition! Looking forward to your next, Pete.

A sensuous, sensual and (literally) earthy tale. Very enjoyable.

Slow, easy, and really hot. This site needs more writing like yours!

Best wishes in the contest.

...nugget of gold amongst the dross on this site. True erotica instead of the usual stroke stories.