by buzzinga
Learn to write,, fiction is great but come on,,
She gagged slightly under my forceful thrusts and spitted out saliva and precum out of her mouth which trickled down her chin and all the way to her tits,
( spitted) wtf is that,, and read the fucking line over and over,, you may even decide its fucked
maybe ( she spit out saliva and precum which trickled down her chin and over her tits)
Sorry zero* since there is no minus,, and didnt have to make it half way through this trash to come to that conclusion