All Comments on 'Mailroom Girls'

You claim copyright so I ask if you are the original author. This story has been on internet for years, and it looks like you changed the 1st part of it to update it a bit.

This is part two.....what happened to part one???

This was by far the worst story ive read on here. it didnt make me wet or anything dull dull dull zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sorry did i fall asleep

As a writer you suck bigtime ! The story was totally boring and made no sense at all and was a waste of time !Dont write anymore stories ,because this one sucked

What wrong with people why so much hate and anger.

It's a good premise for humiliation and bdsm. needs some sex though. I liked it.

Why were the female executives demoted to the mail room? Why would they accept that treatment? Why don't they just quit? Are they still getting paid executive salaries? Has anyone heard of Title VII? Why would a business be run like this? This story requires too much of the reader. My suspension of disbelief was exhausted by the third paragraph.

Suspension of disbelief was hung by its neck until dead. There are some strong aspects to this story but too much is missing. All those why's would help the readers buy in and done right, provide more interesting parts for the story. Author, you cheated the story by jumping in too far at the start.

Really liked it, hope you keep it up.

What a poorly written undeveloped story.....no more needs to be,said

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Think I read this story somewhere else before. One of the few early stories establishing the mail girl universe. Still a good one.

Would the author grace us with more?

Thank You and Best Wishes

Simon

this isn't really a story it's a single scene from a larger story ... nicely written for what it is but it doesn't stand on it's own as a full story