All Comments on 'Majgen Ch. 011'

A little sad in places, but then war is aways sad. Children like Majgen are loosing their parents in our world, right now, aren't they now. So we can't read this without thinking about that, can we.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter to find out if anyone can be bothered to spare Majgen any little crumb of love and caring. And I'm looking forward to the next chapter of my life, to see if I can find it in myself to spare any little crumb of love and caring for someone who needs it here.

...because the idea of an empathetic race still killing bothered me so much. But in the end, I agree... Yes, they would. Your writing is true, even when it bothers me.

Sorry people the full story will not be posted online. Don't start reading, contact me if you want word once it is available in book form, in the far future.