All Comments on 'Majgen Ch. 015'

Quite a cliffhanger you left us with! I hope you recover quickly. I would like to see if she will become stronger, despite her desire to please through sacrifice.

I am both happy and sad, happy for another chapter, but sad for the fact that it will probably take a while for the next one to be read:(

.. only cheap wonders pop up instantly.

Take your time, readers won't walk away ... I've enjoyed Majgen's story so far, and will keep checking for new chapters

Totally freaking awesome! Better than many professionally published, big name, SciFi stories I have read. I was getting over a flu today, and this distracted me from feeling miserable for the time it took to read it. And that is worth alot to me.

Stories of this caliber are rare, not merely on this site, but broadly. your humanity and your optimism shine through.

This is some of the best writing on the net I've found. Will eagerly wait for next installment, though please take your time, as you have set yourself a very high standard, I'd rather wait another 6 months than for further installments to be of lower quality

But i feel i have to say thank you for sharing this story with us.

Simply wonderful story,I'm looking forward to book two!

Ps.Perhaps time to quit your daytime work? :)

This more than made up for my disappointment with the last chapter. I loved watching the evolution of Majgen's emotions throughout the interrogation sequence. The ending was well written if predictable. I've been expecting Majgen to be captured for more than a few chapters now.

Hope you can get ch 16 up soon and i have no idea what the guy who voted 0 was thinking.

could you please give an estimated date of when u'll post the next chapter? I've been checking everyday since the last chapter and it's getting annoying to see no new chapter everytime :(

I can only consent to what others before me have written:

It is one heck of a great story, I went right through from Chapter 1 to 15 in two days and it REALLY is one of the better SciFi stories I've read so far currently en par for my personal literotica number 1 with the former number 1.

That being said:

Take your time, but don't take forever, it would be most sad if the story ended prematurely, now that our heroine finally escaped the dreaded Mentarion ways; however that escape route definitely poises some problems...

I'm looking forward to reading more from you,

Cheers

-Shaya

I loved the whole story - longing for more...

Hope it doesn't take you any longer as it already has since your last post which has been a month ago.

Please! I would like to read more.

as usual...but we need more...I know I speak for all of us fans of majgen when I say that we need to know what is going to happen to our beloved hawlun orphan...please let us see what is happening to her

Sorry people the full story will not be posted online. Don't start reading, contact me if you want word once it is available in book form, in the far future.

I have truly enjoyed what I have read so far. Your artistry in allowing the enemy to overcome in this chapter was truly a creative twist I did not see coming. As I get nearer to the end of what you have posted, let me say that this is really well done, from where I started in the appendix to where I am now. I plan to read MOTH after I finish what you have posted of MAJGEN (you many call it a toss-off, but you write too well for that to happen!).

great story from beginning to end, every chapter. intense. i reread this story every year it seems :)