All Comments on 'Make You Bleed'

by Aelwyn

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SilmarillionSilmarillionalmost 12 years ago
Hot and erotic

What a combination you brought to this story. Quick, sexual, erotic yet sensual, all while taking the reader along. It was a most excellent journey and very well written.

jonmartin22jonmartin22over 11 years ago
awesome story!

Very much enjoyed, super sexy, keep up the good work!

misterfbmisterfb4 months ago

I love the blood part. Its the guy giving you his entire body to you. You take it all, cum, sweat, and blood. Excellent! I wish there were more stories like this. Take a razor and make cuts along the shaft.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great story,it's.about time,someone writes a long fingernails story..AWESOME

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