All Comments on 'Making a Whore: The Interview'

How can I book a girl from your agency?

Sir,

You have a definate winner here! An amazing story with exceptional writing. You must continue with this story line!!!!!

Great story. I also would like to se more in this line of stories. Maybe more with Viv. And other girls.

This story line is familiar and the episode is well writen but it is so stuffed with cliches that I could not bother to finish it.

...but where is the condom. No self respecting escort goes bareback - especially if they work for an agency. I know this is fiction but at least acknowledge the fact in someway.

I've read this story and here is my honest review...

Plot - Simple enough but there is a story-line. Not just mindless banging.

Quality of story - Not A+ quality but neither was it trashy. Good build-up. Lots of sensuality. Vivid imagination.

Grammar - Repetition of words like coyly, giggle, slyly and you are confusing your determiner (your) with pronoun (you're). Get it fix and your story will flow smoother.

Eroticism - Yes, it's steamily hot. Your heroine is one hell of a sex kitten. I almost wanked myself. Well, almost. (Self control)

Overall of the story - If you're looking for a story to give you a hard-on this will definitely do it.

Thank you for a neat read.

This story had a new twist that is seldom offered. I think it was sensational. Can we have another "interview" type story?

She's a wonderful new character. I want to read more about her. Nicely done.

Thank God (!) Literotica is not PC on this topic!!

Since the story doesn't use condoms, I guess that means that it will have to be X-rated and not PG-rated!!

Well written story. Can't wait for ensuing chapters.

Well written and sexy as hell look forward to more.

She is very sexy & the writing is good - only marred by the occasional choice of harsh words amongst the more descriptive passages - I'd always prefer to read 'pussy' than 'twat'.