All Comments on 'Making an Offering'

But this story sickens me as well as bordering on the stupid

None of which can be construed as good

yup have to agree what kind of sicko does this

I like blasphemy. A story about slight DBSM, defiling a church alter and anal sex...I think it was a fine story. You need to work a bit on the story line, but not bad.

Fantastic work, a good premise well delivered. Couldnt think higher of you now unless it turned out you had done that.

Anyone who reads stories on this site but then turns around and says they never thought about having sex in church is an outright liar. We've all thought about it at one time or another....... Good story. Needs a little work, but not bad.

I loved this story. It was so detailed that I could picture it in my mind. had me dripping wet and begging for more right along with the leading lady. I'd save my naughtiest confessions just for you.

I didn't like the "I" and "you" messages

I thought it was well written. :)