All Comments on 'Making Mommy Mine'

Iniatially, I thought this would be an interesting story. But the story went down-hill, and the youing man acted and sounded like stupid porn-whore. No class,

I loved it, keep writing and ignore those anonymous assholes

Very average and formulaic - dull.

Those who did not liike your story are just here for a quick yank. This was wonderful. I would love to see another chapter. It will only get better!

great,another chapter please

Really good.

Bit heavy on the name calling, but otherwise I think it would make a good series.

Possibility of more players?

wow great read

can not wait for the next chapter

One of the better incest stories I've read on this site. While some find the language to strong I'm a proponent of dirty talk while having sex and so is my wife.

The story line is set up well and with a few exceptions believable and that's what makes it so hot.

One other thing I liked about your story is that it was written by a woman. Most on this site are by men it just bring a different prospective to this type story line.

Great sex just like great literature is all about the "buildup". You gave us that and even delivered some hot sex for those that must wank to the first story in a possible series. You even left the door open for the MFF threesome.

loved it woud love to know what happens when he involves Hanna

Let's get Hannah and her daughter into the fray :)

You have the start of a great series of stories if you want. There are hints of some many ways the story can go with her friends and the others mentioned in the story. So many potential people to dominate Mommy. Thanks and 5 stars for a very good story.

A well written story, very erotic and kinky. I want to read more of how he puts his mother through her paces.

Thanks for the read.

Very well written & sexy as hell! I agree with some of the other comments that this can go further, like including Hannah with or without her daughter.

Ryan

hotfunfla@yahoo.com

It was like reading my diary. I am 47 and first fucked my son two years ago...i can't give it up..and he can't either. we do bring a friend ( his or mine) into it once in a while..I do anything he needs to do or see, including eating his girl firends.

awesome sexy story. make mommy mine.

so very erotic love it hope there's going to be another part. this part was very exciting love both the story and the writing

Such a good mommy.....provides her son with anything he wants and desires........Oh the possibilities!

Very well done. I loved it.

Very well written and very believable.

Thanks for writing an excellent story! Looking forward to more in this series if that's the direction you're going.

I just can not stop fucking milfs, and fucked my mothers brains out time and time again, after having eaten her cunt till she could not stop cumming.

Dramatic effect -- impact -- might have been greater had Jeremy not been such a self-centered, conceited, manipulative bastard. You depicted him well. Fewer "sluts" and "whores" could be tolerated in the conversations. Yes, an added chapter with Hannah would be welcomed by your eager fans.

maybe one of the best i have read, true sounding, very believable, hot , sexy fuck scenes, and a good plot, more would be great it turn me on for sure

Great story well written but I want to read more. You could start with Hanna and what about Jeremy really taking Eddie out of the picture and maybe getting Eddies wife involved.

Very good read, just please find some more words for penis than "missile". This isn't the cold war.

I find the story's direction odd and the reviewer comments odder. Going 'backdoor' is normally gay, or recreational sex. The meaning and 'weight of that moment' is not great. Unless your mum is a tart who sleeps with everyone, I would think that there might be some other direction you might steer your romance...or, it must just be me...

Never thought I would like a mother/son story as much as I ended up liking this one.

great read, thanks....i'm hoping it doesn't end there

and a reminder, PLEASE NEVER use the word copious, or I'll never read you again <:o)

Great story. I like his control of the women. Looking forward to reading about Elaine and Hannah and maybe Sara?

I'd love to see a sequel chapter (or more) to this. It would be nice to see him build up a neighborhood harem while getting more into the bondage aspects.

But it also would be nice to show that while he can be a dominant type, he also really loves his mother.

Your style of prose is addicktive .... hope you add more Chapters SOON

Spectacular I anticipate a sequel !! Amazing!

Love the story, kept wanting more till the end. No lie, i got wet , and i am a girl. ;)

Very nice start, but this looks like it should be a three or four part story.

Hope you agree and keep'em coming soon.

there has to be a part 2 with your mom and hannah aswell as sarah

need you to write one for me.... about my mother-in-law offering me her ass..... because my won't ......... she staying with us at the moment... she 44 i'm 27 my wife 23

I wonder why it felt.. flat. Oh well, will there be another?

Loved the build-up. The only think that jarred was the way Jeremy used Hannah so cynically to get as his mum. That spoiled the moment for a short while, but then the story carried me past it. Still, I think Jeremy should make amends to Hannah - and all the more reason for a part 2!

This was a well developed story and although I dislike the topic, there are many readers who love this type of story and will really enjoy it. Good luck in the contest.

Fiction is nice, but only when it can be conceived as believable! This is just too way out there.

Believe the premise believe the story.

I didn't believe the premise. Why after seeing her son with other women in her own house didn't she say something to her son.

Oh, I know, she was submissive and her son used this against her.

Like most men I also dreamed about fucking my mother. But I did not want her to be submissive like Jeremy's mother.

Can this story be believed, I think not. If I remember correctly, All older women fall under Jeremy's spell

If a son wants to have sex with his mother, it may be hard to convience her to do it. If a mother wants to have sex with her son all she has to do is ask. 99% of all boys and men will never say no.

And what's with all these stories where the sons always have a hard on that the mother sees but does nothing about it.

So is he 6 foot 1 inch and 230 pounds or 6 foot tall and 1,230 pounds?

Sorry but I laughed when I read this part and when I am laughing, I tend not to find things erotic.

Great build up and detail. I look forward to reading about what happens next!

wonderful fantasy, i enjoyed the story.

It was an excellent fuck story. I want couple more chapters. Definitely want to see what happens with mommy and Hannah. I am a girl, not lesbian but my pussy is dripping wet right now. I'm going to grab my toy and start playing. I almost want him inside my pussy too and fuck me wild. That's what a story should do, make the reader feel like a part of it.

that was a great read three times!!

i looovvved it

I came twice. More, please!!

more!!!! need some more hot acition with Sarah and Hannah as well as making all of them his milf sex slaves

I understand the true meaning of being sadused by an older woman, from previous experiences in the Military, but to Actuall get your Mother, to go against all her inhabitions.....CUDOS to you my friend....

One of the best. Would love to see Part 2 and Part 3...

It was good, rate of seduction just fine. Perhaps, the emotional content was a bit low. Between a mother and her son, even after such a seduction the love part will always be rhere, specially when it is consensual incest, no compulsion, on any of the parties.

I thourghly enjoyed it.Another chapter would be nice also.. Your legs are lovely, another pic with slightly more of them showing would also be appreciated..

Have I ever dreamed of fucking my mom? Never, but I fantasy about other horny sons fucking their own hot mothers. So there.

Jeremy, your hero is a real prick-- few readers are going to like him, or want to be him-- but he's the perfect s.o.b. (sorry mom) to see humiliate, fuck and dominate the cougars in your story. The story is a little too long-- Jeremy could have had one less conquest-- because I couldn't wait for him to fuck his pretty mom. But it was well worth the wait. You have a dirty mind, silkstockings, but that's why we love you. For me, one of the hottest episodes is when he takes his latest woman to his room, fucks and orders her around, then sends her to talk to mom with his cum dripping down her face.

I can't wait to read the sequel-- I bet son and his cougars give mom a workout!

I would have liked to see Eddie get messed up pretty good and pressured some way where he would be unable to take advantage of Mom again, ever.

Hi

I have recently discovered this site. And I enjoy reading incest stories but yours are the best u make me cum over and over wen I finger fuck. Thanks

Luv your writing!!!

A very well written story, good development, nice plot, and I must agree with another of your commenter, Will read the other chapter, and you do have nice legs.

well written and hot but you over used the word missle in my opinion

Jeremy is kind of an a-hole but hey nice to see him fuck his mom. Thanks for a great read!

I really liked the story and can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm not really into the dominating thing but it wasnt too overboard.

I read one or two sentences and that was it. A woman writing from a guy's perspective is the pits.

One of the best reads

When does the next Chapter come out? Pleease i would love to read more.

Well done!

One of the best incest son/mother stories I have read.

I can't wait to read part 2!

This is my favorite "submission" yet! (see what I did there?:)

Thaty is dicky

That was hot. Write more stories. I came 3 times to this story. I would love to fuck UT mommy with u. How big are her tits

I cant wait for you and mom to be with the other woman

loved how hot the sex was in this story-nicely written-nice seduction-[but what happened to the egg????] thanks

...For the most part, it was very nice and sexy, [but Jeremy was a bit 'big headed'] sadly though the story was spoiled by so many missing and wrongly spelled words. And I have 2 questions; when a lady takes the time to wear stockings I wonder why a guy would bother taking them off her before having sex. Secondly, you introduced a love-egg into the scenario but failed to tell us what happened to it later. Otherwise though, it was a pretty good, sexy read.

This story was so yummy. The only thing that would make this better is if he got his sister plus get Mommy pregnant.

Very nice buildup & follow through.

Mom might not have taken it in the ass before, and she might not be ready. Enjoy the pussy first, save the butt for later.

Please!!!!! More physical descriptions. Spoils a good story...

That was fucking awesome I loved it. It did however need the mothers measurements and a bit more descent of her body and such but other then that it was fucking awesome. I only wish that I could actually have that kind of fantasy come true.

Is it really a seduction when he learns about her being submissive and exploits the knowledge?

He is no better than Eddie.

And the language used is demeaning and degrading, not erotic.

Loved it.

A great story still..., yes I re read it again. Thanks

Another favorite of mine. This one had a hero, lovers, a submissive and a motherfucker. Would have enjoyed more revenge on the gangster. Seems he got off easy. Also making his mother a slave to Hannah would be a nice chapter.

i didn't read the story yet but that into, i truly hope you were trying to set the stage. If you do feel you have an Oedipus complex please seek professional help. These stories are a fantasy and should not be confused for real life.

Isn't the author female? Can't be an œdipus complex, then. There's likely a name for it, but that's not it.

We're all here on Lit to perve. Get over your passive-aggressive oh-so-concerned egoism.

Lost interest after the first paragraph and stopped after the truth of his mom being a whore and felt nothing for the mom once she said how she liked getting fucked by Eddie the fat loser. The son was a complete asshole like Eddie and honestly could care less about anyone of these characters. Glad you can write stories but this one was not for me.

Not all these stories are fanasty...some are actually true...moms & sons tend to get lonely & the ages are just right for a prime relationship. My mom seduced me when she was in her 40s as my dad was no longer interested in her but I was in the prime of my life & so we had lots of fun together...she taught me everything I know...it was fantastic & felt wonderful. We're still close today although we're probably only with each other about once a month or so these days.

You keep on writing don't listen to them My cock is hard and you know what we when or cocks get hard Thank you

And if you read the story, you will see he

got the prize. And a lot more, read it and

enjoy I did. Well done, good read.

...THANKS...

I liked it, as always it was well done, and easy to read.

......THANKS.....

Well paced with ample descriptive dialog, made this a very enjoyable story. Planning to read the second installment right away, and other story submittals as time allows.

This guy Jeremy was as big a scumbag as the fat load driving the Porsche.

I think the story is excellent, I cannot wait to read more!!

Nope. Couldn't get past the fat, old, chubby guy on page one. Big turn off. 1*

I didn’t care for the fat guy, either, but I understand why it was needed.

5* from me.

Tc

On to ch 2…

What happened to the egg?

336. Well, I liked it. Although it had some elements that were part of the seduction and not the most attractive, they fit the direction the story was to take and aided its completion. The door is open for more.

Loved it my Mistress of Silk, just thought more could be done with that fat bastage... after forcing his mom into what he did, the son should have destroyed him.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. I am glad to see that the author has an understanding of the Dom/sub relationship. Besides the required need for limitless trust, the Dom/sub must rerspect each other as a person and earned by a willingness to please each other. It is obvious the the mother/sub knows more about this tye relationship than the Dom/sub, it will be interesting to see how quickly the Dom can learn his role and all the responsibilities that go with being a Dom.

Really, really good story!!!!!!!