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by XRoads55

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I enjoyed this scenario...

...but it was distracting from the heat as you switched from past tense to present to past. Keep it in the past and keep them cumin'!

Rye and Ginger

XRoads55XRoads55over 9 years agoAuthor
Please send comments.

Send comments about this story. It was inspired by a nice couple I met on line.

And send comments or ideas. :)

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I'm 59 yrs. old Straight Athletic I meet people online. Then I write about them. I have so much unfinished work Kick me Thump_Thump Kik Thump_Thump