All Comments on 'Making the Grade'

Are you aware that you don't have principles in college . . . or schoolbuses . . . or letters to the parents? 85% of college students are over 18. The only reason they would send your parents a note is to tell them that they aren't getting enough money. As a legal adult, your behavioral issues are between you and the college.

I have to assume that you actually wrote this about a highschool student and decided at the last moment to make her older before posting the story. It needs some work.