All Comments on 'Making the Grade'

I loved it. I was that good student and I'm now that strict teacher. You hit on both at once. My panties are soaked.

GREAT! I was totally wet after reading the story, even over and over again. What this story needs is a sequel.

great story, one of your best (and that's saying a lot!)

Good dialogue, excelent pace. No appology for the praise, just don't grade my spelling. Full marks!

great story, only a few minor complaints.

One, I would like more physical descriptions of the players. perhaps I missed it, but I can't tell what Amber looks like.

I am conflicted on the ending. It's a great ending, sexy and well paced BUT I feel it's a better as an ending of Chapter One.

Which leads to my call for a sequel. Since Amber is talking about her senior year past tense, I'd like to hear about the rest of the year. So, ENCORE, ENCORE!

ive always been a fan of your work!

and just when i thought you may make my 2nd fantasy a reality, you eave me hanging! its such a shame amber had to run away at that point! would have loved to have read about the dog!

and i second the last comment, would love a sequal

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you definitely hit on a number of my buttons as well...

Amazing

Loved the story, but write a sequel! I want more!

Where is the sequal we need way more

More plerase!!!

So very hot, my cunt is so sloppy

Ms McKlain and Amber's head to see how they were feeling about their submission. We never get McKlain's point of view and Amber seems fascinated, but we never hear why, and finds herself wet after witnessing McKlain's spanking, but reports it with no more insight than she would the flight of a passing bird.

There is also some lazy plot development. The author could have Jamie work a little harder to discover Amber watching that Amber, inexplicably, stand up from under the desk, be seen, then duck back under the deck.

Vivement une suite à cette histoire on aimerai bien avoir le point de vue de la prof et de la movaise élèves

This was so sexy and erotic. I loved it

What the fuck kind of ending is that???

C'était excitant mais serait intéressant d'avoir le point de vue de l'enseignante et de celle qui domine avec une attente espéré de les voir et de les lire

we would love to hear how the whole thing started, is a presequel coming?

Great story!!!