All Comments on 'Man, I Feel Like a Woman Ch. 02'

I'm all for Elizabeth being attracted to some other guy besides Victor. Victor still has some growing up to do.

Love where this is going - nice prose

DM

They rent a place without paying anything up front? Makes no sense. First and last month is generally what you pay BEFORE you can move in and talk about being childish, they all move in together with no way to pay the rent?

Love love love! I really like where it's going but hate that the chapters are so short!

I love this story so far; can't wait for you to continue. Great Job!!!

Omg omg omg ugh sooo emotional right now I want more! So good!

Keep writing just get an editor

Would've been more realistic if they had the money saved for the first 1-2 months to have time for searching for jobs, and only after that struggling with money.

Other than that, quite nice, has me hooked so far.