All Comments on 'Manolo's Gift'

by equs64

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dnc_sl_utdnc_sl_utover 14 years ago
Terrific

I really liked how you transitioned from the initial scene and the giving of his gifts to his "taking" you. Also, enjoyed the boldness of your biography. I look forward to reading your other stories.

D

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nothing new here.

Just another rich lonely wife story wanting a big cock from anyone that has one. Thankfully it was short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Same old cuckold wimp story pretending to be LW.

Nothing new from you. Just a selfish woman that wanted to get fucked while the husband works for a living. Good for you. I hope you enjoyed writing the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well written erotic story

not sure it falls in the non-consent genre, since it didn't take her but a minute to consent.I don't see any wimp here. Since cheating is a main theme in erotica, wonder what the two Anons below like to read. At least this story didn't have a cuckold wimp husband who likes to watch and eat cream pie. Thanks for the read author. ML

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good story

Good story Tana, you know how to make a guest feel welcum, godawgs

TechnodunceTechnodunceabout 12 years ago
More

Mmmm, is there any more to this story? It certainly sounds like it didn't just end there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nicely done !!!!

But too short, and it would seem the next step out to his cabin was going to be very erotic, but we are left dangling over the cliff of excitement only to plunge.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I for one want to read the follow up

Where Dr Adams and his second wife tell her to sleep in the barn from now on and practice for the dog and pony show they are going to let her star in from now on

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Cheap slutwife crap!!!

And what now? She is a cheap slutwife and should be punished by her husband or the karma: may be by HIV!!! Your sick fantasy try to make believe adultery is allowed!!! Its a trust braker!! An adulter is always a shammer to his own vows!!!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotalmost 3 years ago

Perfect! Too bad the story is not illustrated with the pictures.

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I started to experiment some with being photographed in partial dress and it sorta snowballed from there to doing sex videos. My stories are from my past and are about 75% true, 25% embellished.