by elisebos
Chuckle, darkly a bit, but deservedly. I wonder if before the end, if 5BT let herself get preggers too. But it doesn't really matter i suppose.
This one is subtle, not as outright erotica as some, and is a better story for it. Thanks for posting it!
Clever but a bit rushed in my opinion. Obviously you have a great imagination, but for me there was too much technical detail and not enough actual SEX!
I liked the twist though! Thanks for sharing. ;)
Mmmm. Nicely done.
I hope you continue to write... in whatever genre and whatever media or forum suits you. You do have skills for the craft. I hope you grow them.