All Comments on 'Maragana Girl Ch. 22'

but now the scene shifts to the US. Great work, I'm more impressed than I can put into words. Thank you for a story that I am enjoying.

She made it through to freedom and turned her life around. Reading on in this great story to see what life holds for her now.

Yeah, the collar is finally off Kim's neck. The feelings and tears that ran down Kim's face would have been great to see. I think some illustrations would have been nice to show life in the country as well as how people, including criminals, lived. Maybe in future stories?

I look forward to reading the further chapters in the saga. Well done, well done.